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Ares & Aphrodite
From the very moment my eyes beheld thee,
Full adorned, head to toe, with shells shimmering
Was when I first saw you rising from the sea
And yet, apparition of time glimmering,
You stepped from the surf and came naked to me,
I, whose darkly ephemeral murmuring
Would by exposure thus mockingly decree,
But it was you became my Aphrodite.
• Ares = God of War, and a lover to:
• Aphrodite = Goddess of Love
• Celebrated & worshiped by the ancient Greeks, and beyond.
Published 18th Feb 2018
| Edited 19th Feb 2018
Author's Note
• This is the Italian poetic form of Ottava Rima; in this case, observing 11-syllabic line count.
• The preview piece is by Russian artist Anize Strix who is also the model.
• The preview piece is by Russian artist Anize Strix who is also the model.
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Well thank you for coming in to receive & enjoy (even though I misspelled his name which should be ARES), and giving it a place on your RL.⚖️
18th Feb 2018 6:35pm
18th Feb 2018 9:30pm
19th Feb 2018 9:36am
Why thank you my friend, for the honor & for inspiring you to try this poetic form which is a fine little challenge. I’ll keep my eyes open on my updates for your first effort.
Jadey🏺
Jadey🏺
19th Mar 2018 10:01pm
19th Mar 2018 10:20pm
27th Mar 2018 4:47am
The Greek Gods are notoriously promiscuous and rather vain, yet you've made this love story seem pure and genuine.
Very nicely written!
Very nicely written!
27th Mar 2018 5:08am
Ahh darling Luna, how wonderful to be well-met on so many matters of poetic themes and their backstories on such stable ground while I as a poet have always had my head in the clouds off/times before I’ve caught myself in the act of writing
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*mischievious smile*
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*mischievious smile*
