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They laid in towering pine tree beds frolic
sprawled comfortable on green needle blankets
his arm basking over hers
a happy curiosity embraced
fever
overtook them
in the moment
they're eyes gaze
crossed paths
a warm cup
of strawberry tea
poured for the perfect girl
sprawled comfortable on green needle blankets
his arm basking over hers
a happy curiosity embraced
fever
overtook them
in the moment
they're eyes gaze
crossed paths
a warm cup
of strawberry tea
poured for the perfect girl
Published 17th Feb 2018
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18th Feb 2018 6:30am
Beautiful words. I also like the way you shaped your sentences into a subtle sculpt. Pure and powerful words. Very nice work. Write more-
18th Feb 2018 7:21pm
I can smell the sharp pine mingling with the sweet berry tea in this write, charging a delicate perfect moment. Well penned samael =)
