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when truth was a lie...
warm breaths
from a cold heart
melted another
frozen in time
lost in a haze
dreams collapsed
like smoke
in the air
once was a spark
lies on the ashes
but I'm no Phoenix
puzzled mind
a playground
for the wicked
and still,
your truth
was beautiful
when you lied...
Published 17th Feb 2018
Author's Note
Last lines came to mind, and I knew I wanted to end the poem with that. And I wrote the poem in reverse.
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- Edited 17th Feb 2018 6:10am
17th Feb 2018 6:09am
do you know how llooonnng... .ive been awaiting?
this one fully engaged me
as always, youve a certain power with words that
touches my whole sense of being
miss you!!
this one fully engaged me
as always, youve a certain power with words that
touches my whole sense of being
miss you!!
Awww thank you so much... it was the best warm and cozy welcome to back in writing and into DUP..
thank you so much
miss you...
thank you so much
miss you...
