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Hung over from start to finish
Medication fight
She was a flower bomb tip
sat in my market
She was a flower bomb tip
sat in my market
Published 15th Feb 2018
Author's Note
My first haiku I think.
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16th Feb 2018 2:24pm
It reads nice of this your first haiku Samael. Glad you started to write it. I like this but it is a bit over my head....
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
17th Feb 2018 3:36am
I always enjoy haikus regardless of the subject matter - I like the strangeness of this one - got my grey matter sparking :-))))))))
Anonymous
17th Feb 2018 3:12pm
really cool, i love it. makes me think of a love just waiting to detonate into something really explosive
17th Feb 2018 3:15pm
That's the closest anyone has gotten to the interpretation on any of my sites so far.well done.
Anonymous
17th Feb 2018 3:49pm
cool. :)
i'm glad i caught some of its meaning.
i'm glad i caught some of its meaning.
