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Consume

The world was getting to me.
Ripping me apart
so I let it in
and swallow me whole.

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The world was getting to me.
Ripping me apart into  pieces.
Threading it's way in
So I gave up
and let it swallow me whole.
Just to see what a shallow
hole I had become.


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Written by idolwords (Lacey Ann)
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