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[ Valentines 2018 ] Lasting Impressions
Names hearted
carved into a tree---
a declaration of Love ...
until bark is shed;
hardly an eternity
So, I suggest
we instead
do it
in wet cement
---perhaps a sidewalk
under construction
in the bustling city
for all to bear witness
trafficking in rushed hours
slowing the fuck down
and enjoying the moment
Our perfect shaped Hearts
preserved in the concrete
---what a lasting impression
THAT would make
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