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[ Valentines 2018 ] Lasting Impressions

  
Names hearted
carved into a tree---  
a declaration of Love ...  
   
until bark is shed;  
hardly an eternity  
   
So, I suggest  
we instead  
do it  
in wet cement  
   
---perhaps a sidewalk  
under construction  
in the bustling city  
   
for all to bear witness  
trafficking in rushed hours  
slowing the fuck down  
and enjoying the moment  
   
Our perfect shaped Hearts  
preserved in the concrete  
---what a lasting impression  
THAT would make  
 
 
Written by JohnnyBlaze
Published | Edited 30th Aug 2020
Author's Note
for Ahavati 💜💜
Always and Forever
cast in stone for Eternity
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