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Hell-O-gram. ( Hello I say )
uh , yes,
I did , but
some one
was not
pay ing
atte ntion..... 'owever , in retrospect
there
was no call
to eXpect attention to
to be paid even
to 'my' dearest
sorrows.
The subject of sincere dissipation
on any of our accounts or assessments (judgements)
seems to have lost it's significance.
And whether it has or not, is of little [to no] consequence
.
as for "Hello", far superior than
than the pandemic "Hi. How are you?"
" I'm fine. How are you?"
"Oh, I'm just fine. And You?
"Fine" ~~ superfluosity~~
as more toxicity leeches into the
water table for children
to drink,
and gross idiots have their
dainty digits
hovering over redplastic
doomsday buttons
doomsday buttons
doomsday buttons
Everything is fine...............Hell O ! and
blezz'ed Be !
(And as we make [earth] Our Own Hell, keep fakin'yOur personal Heaven)
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20182018dankozakpoomistry&dkzkBadFotoism
Published 10th Feb 2018
Author's Note
Hell O.........
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10th Feb 2018 11:42pm
10th Feb 2018 11:46pm
11th Feb 2018 00:16am
11th Feb 2018 1:37am
11th Feb 2018 00:20am
Makes it easier to understand
Kinda like math
Get to the point
Put in in simplest form
Kinda like math
Get to the point
Put in in simplest form
11th Feb 2018 1:42am
sorry
Lowest Common Denominator
is
not
poetry..............
y've got to work & challenge the limits of yr consciousness to get the real thing.........the rest is just ego braying, usually stupid, bullshit.
Lowest Common Denominator
is
not
poetry..............
y've got to work & challenge the limits of yr consciousness to get the real thing.........the rest is just ego braying, usually stupid, bullshit.
11th Feb 2018 4:09am
True but some need to be entertained while passing the time.
No one likes to be repeatedly blindsighted
No one likes to be repeatedly blindsighted
11th Feb 2018 5:31pm
Blindsighted? Ha...interesting. Then it worked the way it was intended.
There's plenty of clichéd, very understandable, bland, pedestrian, superfluous writing around that I don't need to add to it.
If you're upset by being "blindsided"** by my seeking to explore a more edgy perspective in expression, you don't need to read it, but I'm glad to have 'blindsighted' you. Art needs to challenge one's 'comfort zone'.
**PS: check out the word 'blindsided', & see if that's what you meant.
Thank you.
There's plenty of clichéd, very understandable, bland, pedestrian, superfluous writing around that I don't need to add to it.
If you're upset by being "blindsided"** by my seeking to explore a more edgy perspective in expression, you don't need to read it, but I'm glad to have 'blindsighted' you. Art needs to challenge one's 'comfort zone'.
**PS: check out the word 'blindsided', & see if that's what you meant.
Thank you.
11th Feb 2018 7:23pm
No I like blind sighted
Oh please challenge the comfort zone
It keeps it interesting
Oh please challenge the comfort zone
It keeps it interesting
12th Feb 2018 9:16pm
12th Feb 2018 5:38pm
I freaking hate the response "fine"
So half assed and obviously elusive to anything actually relevant -_-
Totally triggered (pet peeve)
On another note, the title brought Helloween to mind and now I might need to jam later haha
Hell-o
God-bye
and all that jazz
inbetween ~
So half assed and obviously elusive to anything actually relevant -_-
Totally triggered (pet peeve)
On another note, the title brought Helloween to mind and now I might need to jam later haha
Hell-o
God-bye
and all that jazz
inbetween ~
12th Feb 2018 9:20pm
did someone say "fine" ?
Smack th fugger down!
) & then EVERYTHING will be
fine )
Smack th fugger down!
) & then EVERYTHING will be
fine )
