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Deja Vu
deja vu: I see you
glinting
from the corner
of my eye
shadows electrify
ignite
memories
recollections flutter by
as I’m
wandering
through space and time
I’m swept away...
scenes are dripping
vacant eyes are peering
cautious and leery
at painted canvas
stained
reminiscence stings
spilling into me
grasping at
imaginations
hieroglyphics of
impermanence
metaphysics
I wonder at
your meaning
dreaming
repetitious screaming
as a blade
presses into skin
splits
peeling open
crimson beading
I awake
but can’t escape
this haunting feeling
bleeding
damaged
I’ve breached capacity
silenced...
traveling offender
hindered
my psyche falters
relive it all for
an addiction
daunting
calling its puppeteer
and so it is
as I feared
a fervent fever burns
internal taunting
eternally concealed
suicide:
please beseech me
I am in need...
Published 7th Feb 2018
| Edited 11th Feb 2018
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7th Feb 2018 6:49pm
I didn't want to 'Like' this ( despite it being excellently written ) because I felt so sad I was in tears. But then I read David's and understood.
Not even Death can separate Love. 💕
Not even Death can separate Love. 💕
7th Feb 2018 7:46pm
8th Feb 2018 00:26am
It can be hard to write about such a disturbing subject manner with such suavity, I like this a lot.
8th Feb 2018 4:42pm
11th Feb 2018 11:53pm
Such a sad but well written piece obviously written from the depths of your soul. The idea of courting suicide breaks my heart with the individual problem that I can justify this course of action for myself - they say that nobody can tell the future but, for me, I can hence I can court suicide as a release. I sadness me the such a beautiful person as yourself would ever have to consider this as an option, but I do understand this flirtation - I just wish it wasn't so and it never had been so - you deserve so much better than you have had in the past - hopefully your future is looking brighter.
we have a deal a pact if you will - we will go together <3 <3 <3 I Love you <3
we have a deal a pact if you will - we will go together <3 <3 <3 I Love you <3
Your comments are so touching David... this poem did reach into the darkest corners of my existence.
Hmm..
a delicate atmospheric grim piece...
I can learn from this too!
nice
<3
H
a delicate atmospheric grim piece...
I can learn from this too!
nice
<3
H
17th Feb 2018 4:34pm
Wise observations poetess, I’ve missed your presence <3 Thank you for touching on this raw piece H.
24th Sep 2018 10:44am
Not that you need another flattering comment, but I offer one anyway. :-)
You express yourself very well, especially in this genre!
You express yourself very well, especially in this genre!
24th Sep 2018 12:01pm
Thank you kindly Poet, it is often those dark times when the soul is screaming to escape that expression cannot be denied.
