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My love is an orchid carved by Rodin,
petals flutter cupped in song, sister flowers
forswear their bloom, naked and luminous
pure and untouched.
petals flutter cupped in song, sister flowers
forswear their bloom, naked and luminous
pure and untouched.
Published 29th Jan 2018
| Edited 30th Jan 2018
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 1:21am
a simplistic beauty which attached to my breaths,
and refuses to let go... love it
yeassss!
and refuses to let go... love it
yeassss!
30th Jan 2018 5:40am
Thank you so much. I like that it lingers like the scent of a flower long after within you.
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
18th Aug 2018 8:16pm
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