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And this wood mouse is our least concern
The moon; he sat smiling'
and the stars laid & laughed,
as the Panzer tracks grew to one hundred-ton monsters.
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Inspired by Ezra Pounds "and the days are not long enough".
and the stars laid & laughed,
as the Panzer tracks grew to one hundred-ton monsters.
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Inspired by Ezra Pounds "and the days are not long enough".
Published 26th Jan 2018
| Edited 28th Jan 2018
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
26th Jan 2018 3:51pm
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27th Jan 2018 4:43am
My critique would be:
'The moon; he sat smiling...' (or something like that with a bit more inflection and distinction through the use of punctuation)
Nice little pieces to read today dude! 😊
'The moon; he sat smiling...' (or something like that with a bit more inflection and distinction through the use of punctuation)
Nice little pieces to read today dude! 😊
28th Jan 2018 12:23pm
29th Jan 2018 9:04am
I always like short poems that can convey the title with power, the power to demand an emotional reaction - this poem does just that ;-))))
great stuff :-))))
great stuff :-))))
