deepundergroundpoetry.com
It's Fine, I Have A High Tolerance For Rupturing.
You snitched the language
right beneath
the buds of my tongue
and proceeded
to forcefully freeze them
instead
I gnaw
godlessly
on that blasphemous muscle
Fonts in baptismal
hamburger
puddles of red
Cryo based
aftertastes
by toothpastes
with shavings of lead
Heavy
sweaty hums won't
hover heavenward;
Won't wander...
won't drift
from the rifts within
my sour skin
They stay sinfully
sticky ;
Spilling wicked
wetspots
under
pilling
flannel sheets
right beneath
the buds of my tongue
and proceeded
to forcefully freeze them
instead
I gnaw
godlessly
on that blasphemous muscle
Fonts in baptismal
hamburger
puddles of red
Cryo based
aftertastes
by toothpastes
with shavings of lead
Heavy
sweaty hums won't
hover heavenward;
Won't wander...
won't drift
from the rifts within
my sour skin
They stay sinfully
sticky ;
Spilling wicked
wetspots
under
pilling
flannel sheets
Published 22nd Jan 2018
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 2
comments 11
reads 614
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
22nd Jan 2018 12:30pm
beautiful Atomik this write left me with the aftertaste
of your brilliance as my senses were bombarded with imagery..
love Crim
of your brilliance as my senses were bombarded with imagery..
love Crim
22nd Jan 2018 2:43pm
22nd Jan 2018 1:38pm
I imagine Jesus
standing there
all Pulp Fiction style
with religion as a gun
opening fire
tongues tip toeing to please
"I gnaw
godlessly
on that blasphemous muscle "-zombie christian hahaha
"Fonts in baptismal
hamburger
puddles of red "- i see someone drown in the baptism pool...floating
"Cryo based
aftertastes
by toothpastes
with shavings of lead "- you just froze us in a cryo chamber and now we're waking up in an post Apocalyptic world...oh,what?
it's only been 15 minutes?
gotcha lol.
Heavy
sweaty hums
hymns cannot be heard that far away
rifts as earthquakes
devour
sin eater
sticky bun sinful almost as devils food cake ahahahaha
sweating like a sinner in church
very very cool write AtoMik.
....stay nuclear and always keep an eye on those United Nations guys....they just want to disassemble you lol
standing there
all Pulp Fiction style
with religion as a gun
opening fire
tongues tip toeing to please
"I gnaw
godlessly
on that blasphemous muscle "-zombie christian hahaha
"Fonts in baptismal
hamburger
puddles of red "- i see someone drown in the baptism pool...floating
"Cryo based
aftertastes
by toothpastes
with shavings of lead "- you just froze us in a cryo chamber and now we're waking up in an post Apocalyptic world...oh,what?
it's only been 15 minutes?
gotcha lol.
Heavy
sweaty hums
hymns cannot be heard that far away
rifts as earthquakes
devour
sin eater
sticky bun sinful almost as devils food cake ahahahaha
sweating like a sinner in church
very very cool write AtoMik.
....stay nuclear and always keep an eye on those United Nations guys....they just want to disassemble you lol
22nd Jan 2018 2:46pm
23rd Jan 2018 1:21am
23rd Jan 2018 3:25am
Hello AtoMik, I'm stopping by to wish you all the best in the current competition in which you've entered this moving ode of the heart. ~~Jade
(like/follows)
(like/follows)
24th Jan 2018 6:57am
23rd Jan 2018 2:47pm
24th Jan 2018 6:58am
23rd Jan 2018 10:21pm
24th Jan 2018 6:57am
