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Untitled 01-19-18
It's hard to breathe
Your love is pressing on my chest
Is it pain or pleasure
Such a thin line between the two
Some days my threshold is higher than others
Touching my skin
And pulling away
Turning me on and off like a light switch
I love you
I hate you
I'm tired of you
I'm undecided
The mental pain you place on me is something I can do without
You always come back at the worst of times
But this time
I can't breathe
Your love is pressing on my chest
Is it pain or pleasure
Such a thin line between the two
Some days my threshold is higher than others
Touching my skin
And pulling away
Turning me on and off like a light switch
I love you
I hate you
I'm tired of you
I'm undecided
The mental pain you place on me is something I can do without
You always come back at the worst of times
But this time
I can't breathe
Published 20th Jan 2018
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"...It's hard to breathe
Your love is pressing on my chest "
an excellent description of "that feeling". Ahh...but how long do we hold on? How long can one stand the depletion of Love's precious oxygen until the soul dies or we become jaded, lifeless. Oh, it is true that it takes a fool to learn that love don't love nobody. One of life's many questions to ponder....
.... sometimes we simply have to close the door in order for a window to open and the light shine through. 🤔🙂
Your love is pressing on my chest "
an excellent description of "that feeling". Ahh...but how long do we hold on? How long can one stand the depletion of Love's precious oxygen until the soul dies or we become jaded, lifeless. Oh, it is true that it takes a fool to learn that love don't love nobody. One of life's many questions to ponder....
.... sometimes we simply have to close the door in order for a window to open and the light shine through. 🤔🙂
20th Jan 2018 1:44am
That feeling can be all too entangling sometimes like an addiction to the pain but oh when that light shines in from a sun source you never expected it is nice 😉
XO
Brandie
XO
Brandie
20th Jan 2018 2:16am
20th Jan 2018 7:50am
Yes the feeling can be but I’ve always found it depends on the person that your with and how much you love them.
Loves breath can nourish you
Loves breath can smother you
Loves highs and loves lows
Love sometimes can break you
True love is a beautiful thing when it lasts
Loves truth can set your heart on fire
Turn away can’t breath just set me free
Running towards you can’t get enough.
Loves breath can nourish you
Loves breath can smother you
Loves highs and loves lows
Love sometimes can break you
True love is a beautiful thing when it lasts
Loves truth can set your heart on fire
Turn away can’t breath just set me free
Running towards you can’t get enough.
21st Jan 2018 4:37pm
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2018 2:38am
Good stuff !!
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