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Open Letter To My Children
I nurtured you from infancy
sang you lullabies
showed you the path
harmony with all things
tried reaching you
with abundant beauty
to calm and sooth
your tortured soul
yet in return you
shred the heart of me
fouling life giving blood
and ravage my gifts
I weep acid tears
they fall toxic
eating away at my being
a shadow of the before
you tell me how much you care
while tearing into my flesh
choking me in polluted air
taking pleasure in your theft
but, I stay my ground,
in staunch resistance
wavering little
to your relentless insistence
assaults and insults
to my very existence
I shall bide my time
and await in wise
aware flawed ways
will be your demise
I will forget you
wipe my memory clean
for nothing you have done
shall later be seen
And maybe, perhaps
within time that will pass
my future offspring
shall not be such an ass
you,
you animal,
who call yourself
human!
Mother Earth
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Re. Open Letter To My Children
19th Jan 2018 8:32pm
Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
19th Jan 2018 8:48pm
reaping that which we have sown
Thank you EU, much appreciated are your comment and visit.
Thank you EU, much appreciated are your comment and visit.
Re. Open Letter To My Children
19th Jan 2018 9:22pm
Give 'em Hell, because we are turning the Earth into fire and brimstone...
Well said T!
JJ
Well said T!
JJ
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
19th Jan 2018 9:49pm
Re. Open Letter To My Children
19th Jan 2018 11:22pm
dearest Teri a very profound write
you shook foundations with this poem..
bravo for our beloved Mother Earth
who should be treasured for the nuturer
& life giver she is..
love Raven
you shook foundations with this poem..
bravo for our beloved Mother Earth
who should be treasured for the nuturer
& life giver she is..
love Raven
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
20th Jan 2018 2:01am
Indeed, just ingrates we have become,
caring above all else, only of ourselves.
Thank you dear Raven.
Your visits and comments, a cake, iced by your RL inclusion.
Teri
caring above all else, only of ourselves.
Thank you dear Raven.
Your visits and comments, a cake, iced by your RL inclusion.
Teri
Re. Open Letter To My Children
19th Jan 2018 11:40pm
excellent metaphor that I didn't get until the end - such a well crafted poem :-))))))
Hugs :-))))))
Hugs :-))))))
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
20th Jan 2018 2:06am
If only the damage we have inflicted
on our home was metaphorical as well.
Thanks always David.
Give a big hug to the forest, when next you visit.
Teri
on our home was metaphorical as well.
Thanks always David.
Give a big hug to the forest, when next you visit.
Teri
Re. Open Letter To My Children
20th Jan 2018 1:35am
beautiful Teri I felt the full sting of this
I read as a mother completely done with her children would write
so I felt the full impact of this powerful write..
excellent..
love Crim
I read as a mother completely done with her children would write
so I felt the full impact of this powerful write..
excellent..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
20th Jan 2018 2:11am
Only a loving Mother would
tolerate the distain we have
shown her. But even she
has her limits.
Appreciation unending, my Lady
Always,Teri
tolerate the distain we have
shown her. But even she
has her limits.
Appreciation unending, my Lady
Always,Teri
Re. Open Letter To My Children
20th Jan 2018 6:13am
Gaia
her patience
and tolerance
beyond human
and
beyond humans.
job.
ink.
profound.
her patience
and tolerance
beyond human
and
beyond humans.
job.
ink.
profound.
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
20th Jan 2018 1:44pm
That she is indeed.
If not, we'd been
sent packing long ago.
Your visit, comment and RL
means more that I have
words for my friend
T
If not, we'd been
sent packing long ago.
Your visit, comment and RL
means more that I have
words for my friend
T
Re. Open Letter To My Children
26th Jan 2018 1:00am
I was feeling quite terrible for you, but luckily it was only the one hospitable planet we could ever reach in a life time of travel speaking.
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
26th Jan 2018 1:47am
Yes, the only home we shall ever have within our life times and who knows has far into the future and this is how we treat it. Quite sad to say the least.
Thanks for the visit and words, Dr.
Thanks for the visit and words, Dr.
Re. Open Letter To My Children
31st Jan 2018 3:18pm
Great poem. Truly touching to see the pictures you describe. Thank you for the opportunity to read your work.
Marty
Marty
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
31st Jan 2018 3:43pm
I wish the pictures could be more pleasing to the eye, but sadly one can only work with what one perceives.
Thank you for stopping by and leave your thoughts, Marty.
Teri
Thank you for stopping by and leave your thoughts, Marty.
Teri
Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
31st Jan 2018 4:42pm
Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
31st Jan 2018 4:56pm
Actually I have read a few of them, however time constraints limit
my ability to read the plethora of poems posted on the site, so, I
do miss quite a few.
Sorry I have not had the time to read all of them, but we do seem to
be like minded in many aspects.
Teri
my ability to read the plethora of poems posted on the site, so, I
do miss quite a few.
Sorry I have not had the time to read all of them, but we do seem to
be like minded in many aspects.
Teri
Re. Open Letter To My Children
24th Feb 2018 4:02am
I really like the sounds in this stanza:
I shall bid my time
and await in wise
aware flawed ways
will be your demise
But it should be "bide my time" in that idiom.
Would it be ok if I shared this with a friend who isn't on this site? I'd give you credit, of course.
I shall bid my time
and await in wise
aware flawed ways
will be your demise
But it should be "bide my time" in that idiom.
Would it be ok if I shared this with a friend who isn't on this site? I'd give you credit, of course.
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
24th Feb 2018 5:00am
A big thank you for catching that error.
No, I was not placing a monetary value on time and have made the
needed change.
Yes, you may certainly share any of my writing found here on DUP,
for it is the only reason I scribe.
Thank you for visiting, the RL, and most of all, the offered correction. All are appreciated.
AT
No, I was not placing a monetary value on time and have made the
needed change.
Yes, you may certainly share any of my writing found here on DUP,
for it is the only reason I scribe.
Thank you for visiting, the RL, and most of all, the offered correction. All are appreciated.
AT
Re. Open Letter To My Children
10th Mar 2018 10:17pm
It's quite sad the damage we the humans have done. Your work also implies a deeper and darker truth. I felt this write deep within my bones. Excellent work my friend. Sincerely,
Shadow
Shadow
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Re: Re. Open Letter To My Children
11th Mar 2018 2:50am
Indeed, our actions will have affects detrimental to our long term future as a species if we do not adapt to our environment instead of expecting it to adapt to us.
Thanks for the visit and comment, Shadow.
Thanks for the visit and comment, Shadow.