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I lost
I feel fake in love,
I can only dream of us,
My personality is fading,
The hatred is fueling a little spark.
Alone in this love,
Surrounded by sharks.
Pasted to a wall of forgotten victims.
A woman sleeps grinning at the scene.
A true friend, once was,
Now lost to my one and only.
I must start a-new.
But,
I am just
A fucked up fish at sea.
I can only dream of us,
My personality is fading,
The hatred is fueling a little spark.
Alone in this love,
Surrounded by sharks.
Pasted to a wall of forgotten victims.
A woman sleeps grinning at the scene.
A true friend, once was,
Now lost to my one and only.
I must start a-new.
But,
I am just
A fucked up fish at sea.
Published 17th Jan 2018
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17th Jan 2018 7:54pm
17th Jan 2018 11:20pm
Flash and splash. Seriously ASD, my second nature is to play and sometimes I do this without thinking. I love the darkness in this because you embrace it just before slicing the throat. It makes me want to tuck you in. Okay, I'll leave the light on...
Switching gears, this is such a lonely lament that I really do want to protect you. Let it all go. Once free of this dwelling your chest will well up and take charge.
Dai
Switching gears, this is such a lonely lament that I really do want to protect you. Let it all go. Once free of this dwelling your chest will well up and take charge.
Dai
11th Mar 2018 00:07am
You need to become yourself again...you probably already have. No one should ever be able to sap you of your identity. I like this poem a lot. Brava!
