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I am a sister I am a brother
I am a father I am a mother
I am a daughter I am a son
I am the many I am the one
I am a worker I am an employer
I am a creator I am a destroyer
I am righteous I am a sinner
I am a loser I am a winner
I am a hater I am a lover
I am obvious I am under cover
I am a hitter I am a receiver
I am a doubter I am a believer
I am truthful I am a liar
I am frigid I am fire
I am saved I am savior
I am thought I am behavior
I am in orbit I am low
I am a victim I am a foe
I am a peering crowd in a face
I am a fractious human race
I am a father I am a mother
I am a daughter I am a son
I am the many I am the one
I am a worker I am an employer
I am a creator I am a destroyer
I am righteous I am a sinner
I am a loser I am a winner
I am a hater I am a lover
I am obvious I am under cover
I am a hitter I am a receiver
I am a doubter I am a believer
I am truthful I am a liar
I am frigid I am fire
I am saved I am savior
I am thought I am behavior
I am in orbit I am low
I am a victim I am a foe
I am a peering crowd in a face
I am a fractious human race
Published 16th Jan 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2018
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5th Mar 2018 00:03am
Pretty cointroversial...
Intrigued, the visions and the solutions say "I am a doubter I am a believer ".
Intrigued, the visions and the solutions say "I am a doubter I am a believer ".
5th Mar 2018 00:14am
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8th Apr 2018 1:23pm
Nice write and observation! I loved the rhyme and rhythm of not being forced.
8th Apr 2018 3:03pm
i appreciate your comment and glad you like it.
It's nice when the message, the rhyme and rhythm join relatively seamlessly and i have found that it's easiest for me to do that when i set myself narrow parameters. That way i am forced to use my imagination.
It's nice when the message, the rhyme and rhythm join relatively seamlessly and i have found that it's easiest for me to do that when i set myself narrow parameters. That way i am forced to use my imagination.
24th Apr 2018 11:35pm
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