-I love You-

Oh i like it.
strong emotions pushing out.
writing in pen
recanting

then left empty
dropped off on a new strange road to travel.
excellent write

to quote a band named "Emery" :

"As simple as I can
I'll tell you the difference
Between a pencil and a pen
And where it will leave us now
As your body lets you die
And I sit here still alive"

very thought provoking  spesialK
keep'em coming.

Thanks for the great feed back Samael.
I will try to keep them up
X

YOU ARE MORE THAN ENOUGH,SpecialK,its a lurnin curve when were not appreciated,but never internalise anothers issues or need for something diffrent.
YOUR JST RIGHT,AS YOU ARE.
I'd only......
CuriousJae

Awwwww thanks babe

Cloventongue89
Thanks for the good feed back wow...

I am really new to this so love the way all of you see my work and tell me what's your own feeling about it...By the way I love the band blindside myself great taste in music dude

Great insight,I must say,but if I may add,sometimes another way of loving someone is to let them go,especialy if uve done the math,see where your at in your own personal evolution,and then realise u need to deal with the root of the problem,before it causes more hurt an damage.I do think its noble to sacrifice what one wants to the admitance of the truth,to the aspiration of doing a greater good,cos to love someone is about looking forward,but in looking forward u must look around u and take of the rose coloured glasses,and see if your touch is smoothing things over or leaving a bruise,in mindlessness,so much more hurt is being cause,its unneccasary.Who wants to live with anothers issues,who wants to be that live in psycologist,who's playing the dual role of mommy also to fix you.if I know onething,I know TRUE love is not selfish,its selfless.which means I wil cheak my levels at the door,and give u the best I can,sometimes that best is realising u need help,or u have issues,or u have work to do,and letting the other go..Thnk u for sharing such an insightful comment,Keep well brotha

Brotha,I'm not attacking or asserting some concept of male dominance.I'm merely sharing another aspect.I Truely ment it when I said I appreciate your insights,because what ure saying is true,and I value the truth.I dnt like explaining myself but for the greater good of all who might stumble apon this,I wil say this,that sometimes people hurt eachother when they not aware of their issues,sometimes those same ppl come from hard backgrounds,and tough situations,but one whe has gone thu a lot,really thinks bout things they would realise,they have work to do on themselves before they hurt another,who really doesn't deserve it,I read ure initial comment 3+ times to jst make sure that I understand its truth,I'd suggest u take another look over mine to see that I come in peace.Another thing,u dnt have to put me down by cursing and accusing me of things,I dnt know u,but I know this,always try to be the bigger man,cos true strength is kindness..I hope we can clear up this misunderstanding,and take the wisdom from the words given,and apply it to all our lives so we can be better people and have hapier lives.
Well wishes
MARVELLOUS

Maybe u misred into what I was trying to say,who knows.let me clear up one thing,As I said,I salute your insight,but wht I did cos this is a platform where everyone can voice their insights,I said I'd like to add something,meaning I'd like to give another side to the story or situation or whatever.I wasn't a personal attck to make u feel small,or disrespect u,I'm not like that,with anyone,I don't put ppl down.it was merely another side to things that I thought should be hurd.cos alota people me included are dealing with lotsa things,and my take is step back and asses.I'm looking forward to communicating with u some more.Your welcome brotha.
MARVELLOUS

I've said wht was neccesary to be said to clear things up,much more than that seems pointless.I dnt want to be right,that's poinless also,to me its jst matter of understanding,and broudening our perspective on things.
If u took my comment as an insult to you personally,I'm sorry for that,but I think I've explained my reasoning enough,Wht u do with that and everything mensioned is up to u.
Keep well
MARVELLOUS

Thank you very much