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[ fAwL ] What this heart knows
is a missing
when you leave the room
similar to loss of words
eluding my grasp
as desire to behold
you in these arms
is greeted with so many
lifetimes we've yet to live
that I wish to remember
now
when you leave the room
similar to loss of words
eluding my grasp
as desire to behold
you in these arms
is greeted with so many
lifetimes we've yet to live
that I wish to remember
now
Published 14th Jan 2018
| Edited 2nd Nov 2021
Author's Note
for Ahavati 💜
the Love of my Lifetime
the Love of my Lifetime
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14th Jan 2018 11:54pm
Anonymous
15th Jan 2018 00:11am
Life has, sadly, turned me towards cynicism (what was it Wilde said: "Cynic knows the price of everything, but value of nothing.") but the love you share is so beautiful & pure.
16th Jan 2018 5:21pm
15th Jan 2018 4:36am
Elegant and beautiful.
lifetimes we've yet to live
together that I wish to
remember now
These 3 lines speak volumes. Sentiment well captured.
lifetimes we've yet to live
together that I wish to
remember now
These 3 lines speak volumes. Sentiment well captured.
16th Jan 2018 5:21pm
Anonymous
15th Jan 2018 8:44am
gushy and what ever. the poem was okay
16th Jan 2018 5:23pm
Anonymous
16th Jan 2018 7:07pm
i kinda like long rants.. 😊yet this is okay too bitter
Anonymous
16th Jan 2018 7:09pm
yea poem was good
