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Son I hope
Son I hope you understand one day why you always saw daddy cry most days
and I hope you understand one day why its hard for daddy to come out and play
but most of all I hope you understanding one day why Daddy almost took his life that day. Heartache is something you can't truly explain
just like love you can't fully explain
it's something inside you that only u can feel. But the amount of love I have for you son I promise not even heartache and steal
and no matter what someone might try and say Ethan you were made with love at the end of the day
I truly hope with all of my heart
u never experience what make your daddy fall apart
and I hope you understand one day why its hard for daddy to come out and play
but most of all I hope you understanding one day why Daddy almost took his life that day. Heartache is something you can't truly explain
just like love you can't fully explain
it's something inside you that only u can feel. But the amount of love I have for you son I promise not even heartache and steal
and no matter what someone might try and say Ethan you were made with love at the end of the day
I truly hope with all of my heart
u never experience what make your daddy fall apart
Published 13th Jan 2018
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13th Jan 2018 11:33am
as a dad
this both broke my heart
and moved me beyond words
i wish no dad has to go through this
and no son had to listen/read ( i know it's an unrealistic wish)
some expression
dear Friend.
welcome to the community
deep-side!
ps: not a critique, just a pointer,
L8 W3, i believe you meant 'can' instead of 'and'
this both broke my heart
and moved me beyond words
i wish no dad has to go through this
and no son had to listen/read ( i know it's an unrealistic wish)
some expression
dear Friend.
welcome to the community
deep-side!
ps: not a critique, just a pointer,
L8 W3, i believe you meant 'can' instead of 'and'
13th Jan 2018 11:38am
Thank you and yes I know it's inevitable he must make his own path and someday he may cross a similar path as mine I just hope I'm still around to help him through it I luxury I don't have except for p putting it into words
