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[ fAwL ] Way Out There
Moth, am I
You, a Butterfly
We need to declutter
---be freed from utterly
claustrophobic cocoons
Leave Earth shed behind
lead one another blind
weave in flights through
a sun dusted twilight's
worth of planets and moons
Navigate
using celestial charts
without aid of apps or maps
so conventional
We co-create
attracted to Starlight
drawn to the Arts
Multi-dimensional
Really way out there
where exists more space to
breathe
Published 12th Jan 2018
| Edited 2nd Nov 2021
Author's Note
inspired by Us 💖🐛🐛💖
( We know who We are )
( We know who We are )
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12th Jan 2018 9:48pm
12th Jan 2018 10:03pm
Nice throughout, especially the ending. I always become claustrophobic in multi dimensions and appreciated the space to breathe. Cool JohnnyBlaze
13th Jan 2018 2:06am
The moth is very symbolic of personal growth and transformation, as well as steadfast determination toward the light. It plays a significant factor in Love above material possessions of the world. Even unto death it seeks the light.
I'm not surprised you associated with it.
My people ( Native Americans ), believed the butterfly is a symbol of change, joy and considered it a miracle of transformation and resurrection.
I'm honored you associated me with such.
This is such a celestial beauty of poem generating such hope. Thank you. 📝💜
I Love You. 💑
💜
I'm not surprised you associated with it.
My people ( Native Americans ), believed the butterfly is a symbol of change, joy and considered it a miracle of transformation and resurrection.
I'm honored you associated me with such.
This is such a celestial beauty of poem generating such hope. Thank you. 📝💜
I Love You. 💑
💜
We've both been through so much, living out of or in our own suitcases so to speak for far too long and emerging to breathe the free air.
Time to fly, Babe.
I Love You. 💜
💑
Time to fly, Babe.
I Love You. 💜
💑
