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Love happens Haikus 7.1
(i) Physics
a pulse and a spark
mutual love and attraction
electricity
(ii) Everything
mind body and soul
I'm loving everything
Love truly complete
(iii) Winner
Love is a lotto
I'm glad I bought a ticket
and I won your heart
(iv) Love Meds
Medication time!
love: A drug that really works
please medicate me
(v) Warmth
unexpected beauty
enters my heart like sunshine
Loving and being loved
(vi) Pulses
true love pulse quickens
sacrifice trumps the ego
their heart comes first
(vii) Innocent
reborn teenager
awkward and nervous fumbling
True love keeps you young
Published 12th Jan 2018
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 6:09am
These are bringing me huge smiles David! It's fabulous when it works out like this outline!
Never ending warm fuzzies being sent across that chilly pond!
xoxo Taryn
Never ending warm fuzzies being sent across that chilly pond!
xoxo Taryn
12th Jan 2018 9:55pm
thank you much for you're unwavering support It means such a lot :-)))
Big Huge hugsssssss :-)))))))
Big Huge hugsssssss :-)))))))
12th Jan 2018 11:42am
12th Jan 2018 9:55pm
12th Jan 2018 1:58pm
" Think not that you direct the course of Love. . .for if Love finds you worthy, shall direct yours. . ."
Stay the course, David. It can be a rough one; however, the rewards are endlessly beautiful.
Well done, My Friend.
Stay the course, David. It can be a rough one; however, the rewards are endlessly beautiful.
Well done, My Friend.
12th Jan 2018 9:57pm
thank you for such wise words I will keep them close and they will warm me through the tougher bits :-)))))))
12th Jan 2018 2:55pm
Exquisitely expressed, I’m dearly touched with each line my Love! We sure did win the love lotto, and I am happy to medicate you every day with the beautiful electricity running between us 😊
All of me loves all of you! <3
All of me loves all of you! <3
12th Jan 2018 10:52pm
Again you are my muse in writing such poetry, how could you not be?
You inspire me, you love me and it's inspirational loving you <3 <3
Love, gratitude and passionate hugs :-}
You inspire me, you love me and it's inspirational loving you <3 <3
Love, gratitude and passionate hugs :-}
Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 7:44pm
David, I can't tell you how tickled I am that you and the lovely nightbird have found this love. I can't think of anyone I'd wish it for more, my friend. These haikus bring bigger smiles with each one read.
So many happy hugs! :-)
...ever your Willow
So many happy hugs! :-)
...ever your Willow
14th Jan 2018 8:38pm
Awwwweeeee that was such a beautiful thing to say :-))))))))))))
Huge massive Hugs :-))))))) <3
Huge massive Hugs :-))))))) <3
Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 9:17pm
Heart warming to read of such a precious lotto win.
A happiness truly deserved <3
A happiness truly deserved <3
14th Jan 2018 8:39pm
12th Jan 2018 11:47pm
Beautifully written David.
May you both be blessed in your new found love.
Teri
May you both be blessed in your new found love.
Teri
14th Jan 2018 8:40pm
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14th Jan 2018 8:41pm
13th Jan 2018 7:08pm
Dear David,
So lovely...each on its own but quite beautiful together. I suppose that is precisely how love works. Well done:) Could not be happier for you both. Bless.
So lovely...each on its own but quite beautiful together. I suppose that is precisely how love works. Well done:) Could not be happier for you both. Bless.
14th Jan 2018 8:43pm
awwwweeeee thank you Mel by the bucket load for such kind comments :-))))))))
Hugsssss :-)))))))
Hugsssss :-)))))))
