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Haiku: prelude to revelations
distractions here, there,
let he who can hear and see
Trump prepare the way...
let he who can hear and see
Trump prepare the way...
Published 8th Jan 2018
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8th Jan 2018 2:17am
11th Jan 2018 00:11am
hey Crim, and it's just in your face like dam, know I always appreciate de la falling through...
11th Jan 2018 00:11am
hey Crim, and it's just in your face like dam, know I always appreciate de la falling through...
11th Jan 2018 00:12am
hey Crim, and it's just in your face like dam, know I always appreciate de la falling through...
11th Jan 2018 00:20am
11th Jan 2018 00:24am
8th Jan 2018 2:26am
11th Jan 2018 00:17am
thanx smackdownraven, it's transparent for the most part, lol I would love to know the genesis of your name...
14th Jan 2018 8:41pm
hey there Dean actually a fellow poet
named me thus I guess it's how he viewed
my poetry & I chose the avatar to suit the name..
I appreciate you asking..
love Raven
named me thus I guess it's how he viewed
my poetry & I chose the avatar to suit the name..
I appreciate you asking..
love Raven
8th Jan 2018 7:58am
ooooh that apricot hellbeast is one to watch...
... gone mad with power
interesting times ahead
... gone mad with power
interesting times ahead
11th Jan 2018 00:28am
hey shadoe, lmao, and he ain't even the one pulling the strings, apricot hellbeast lol, love when you eclipse my page...
8th Jan 2018 2:05pm
I worry for the future but realize it will happen regardless, so merely prepare.
I would lose the comma at the end of L1 since there's a natural break there.
Solid, Dean.
I would lose the comma at the end of L1 since there's a natural break there.
Solid, Dean.
11th Jan 2018 00:35am
hey Vati, yeah it's destiny but u still wanna fight it, acceptance one of the hardest lessons, lol I need to change' he' to 'they' also, thanx babygirl...
23rd Jan 2018 1:59pm
