falling

Hope you were talking about "falling snow" my dear...i know it's super chilly in eastern American, the -45 degree celsius could be really awful...hope your place isn't so dreadful...
Even though the life is unknown and uncertain, we still have hopes....it will only get better I believe my dear...

much much love
RoseJasmine

thank you dear rose jasmine,
these days have been so cold and my job it is also freezing in there.
i wrote this poem about falling in love though
even when things were falling apart in my life
i still fell in love

:)

That's really nice. Who is the lucky one having your love? :)
Glad you have got some joy in your life...

A lovely love poem Marielle!
Falling can be such a wonderful sensation...
JJ

thank you!

This was very beautiful.
We all need friends in this horrible world, to help us bear the pain.
Life feeling uncertain?
There's so much uncertainty in life, true.
Short but nice to read.

thank you so much for your comment and for reading

Good use of repetition on
"I only knew of falling"

great opening line
"You mean something to me
Under starlight so serene "- maybe a moon lit, star lit  picnic in your eyes where the wold melts away

"I held your hand
In unknown days "- uncertainty can be pretty scary as far as the future goes.it makes me think of how any of us could die at any moment,reasons we should make the most of our time and efforts;weather it be writing or spending time with loved ones.

i think it's time to crank up my bucket list again.

inspiring poem mariellewrites
well penned, you help bring out the best of us here.

wow thank you so much, i am touched.

And another touching poem. It is such a wonderful feeling when we are able to fall. Love is such perfection when we arent able to let ourselves into the love but we fall. I remember that feeling
Marty