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Dear Woman

    
 
 
 
  Dear woman,  
   
   
   
             what a world we live in;  
             endless objectives, different perspectives;  
             turmoil embedded in the subconsious of many;  
          the environment legitimately seems anything but friendly;  
   
   
                if most men are dogs,  
                then I'm a golden retriever;  
                I don't fall in love;  
                like the well trained believer;  
   
                  
                one's mind dwells much deeper;  
              life would be precious if no wedge were between us;  
              less vanity, less pride, no outside influence;  
              like rebels letting go of our worldly demeanor;  
   
   
              refine our emotions, like aged wine in the freezer;  
              recreating new meaning to this life that deceives us;  
              the lust that we share; like a catch from a wide receiver;  
              open and true; easily taking a breather....  
                
   
               tomorrow's not promised;  
               resolutions aren't either....  
               the earth could end soon,  
               as if all were just meaningless;  
   
                  
               would be nice for two souls,  
               to surpass in dwell freely;  
               no longer subjected to worldly achievements....  
                
                  
                  
                  
   
                  
                
                    
                  
                  
   
   
                  
   
   
                
                
   
   
          
   
   
   
        
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