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Degenerate on the dartboards missile tails; not mistletoe
Smite me unmerciful god
sexually suggestive are our tendencies
assaulting lips upon lips
like an M2 Browning
there is no sand dune cover
under ripples of scorching heat waves
for this crossfire cunt of a life we're in
sharp as the Devil herself
we'd bet the brothel we're fucking in if we could
slick sinners singing hallelujah
lust trickles from the rooftop bathing naked
girls with blue hair excite me
or blonde
or whatever you are today
our affair was never business
but still you broke me
a goddamned coffee cup in the breakroom
sexually suggestive are our tendencies
assaulting lips upon lips
like an M2 Browning
there is no sand dune cover
under ripples of scorching heat waves
for this crossfire cunt of a life we're in
sharp as the Devil herself
we'd bet the brothel we're fucking in if we could
slick sinners singing hallelujah
lust trickles from the rooftop bathing naked
girls with blue hair excite me
or blonde
or whatever you are today
our affair was never business
but still you broke me
a goddamned coffee cup in the breakroom
Published 3rd Jan 2018
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3rd Jan 2018 2:11pm
This was a fantastic read. I Love the Cohen reference. One of my favorites, makes me wonder if you were sitting in a kitchen chair listening to it when you penned this!
3rd Jan 2018 2:35pm
i'm glad you caught that Cohen reference Ahavati, i was singing it all day yesterday driving home.
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2018 2:40pm
Awesome write Samael! Really enjoyed reading this one!
I particularly like “this crossfire cunt of a life we’re in” and “we’d bet the brothel we’re fucking in” lines. Xo
I particularly like “this crossfire cunt of a life we’re in” and “we’d bet the brothel we’re fucking in” lines. Xo
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2018 4:08pm
Love this!
3rd Jan 2018 4:09pm
This is excellent dude! It really makes you wonder about the backstory. I don't even know precisely what it is here, because all of your stuff is some of my favorite on DUP, but this one really intrigues me.
"girls with blue hair excite me
or blonde
or whatever you are today" Scott Pilgrim!? Haha 😆
"girls with blue hair excite me
or blonde
or whatever you are today" Scott Pilgrim!? Haha 😆
3rd Jan 2018 4:14pm
Not quite Scot Pilgrim, however Ramona Flowers is super hot and i love the movie.
i really like that the manga/books actually have bass guitar lines to Sex Bob-Omb songs.
.....i need to go back and watch that now.
oh and i found out Knoxville was recently ranked the 13th most hipster city in the US ahahahahaha.
based on coffee shops, thrift stores and probably a bunch of other random variables.
i really like that the manga/books actually have bass guitar lines to Sex Bob-Omb songs.
.....i need to go back and watch that now.
oh and i found out Knoxville was recently ranked the 13th most hipster city in the US ahahahahaha.
based on coffee shops, thrift stores and probably a bunch of other random variables.
3rd Jan 2018 6:27pm
i do, i play punk rock and metal bass guitar.
https://www.cbsnews.com/media/the-19-most-hipster-cities-in-america/7/
knoxville is not on this particular list.
https://www.cbsnews.com/media/the-19-most-hipster-cities-in-america/7/
knoxville is not on this particular list.
3rd Jan 2018 8:53pm
Woah!! Portland wasn't even featured, and Seattle was only #14!? That's so weird to me, but I'm oddly happy about it :)
Hoboken ...I always forget about that city. That's a classic hipster joint.
Hoboken ...I always forget about that city. That's a classic hipster joint.
3rd Jan 2018 8:56pm
