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The futures whats at stake
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The futures whats at stake
we're all typos
from an ink ribbon
waiting
to be thrown away
Written by
samael
(Zaroff poetry)
Published
31st Dec 2017
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Re. The futures whats at stake
smackdownraven
31st Dec 2017 4:06pm
profound inking dearest poet
i've long believed we were
a fledgling deities attempt
at creation..
excellent..
~Raven
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Re: Re. The futures whats at stake
samael
(Zaroff poetry)
31st Dec 2017 4:09pm
and thus we return to Fillory..lol
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Magicians_(Grossman_novel)
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Re. The futures whats at stake
AtoMikbomb
31st Dec 2017 4:45pm
*raises a cup of coffee* Hear hear!
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Re. The futures whats at stake
Ahavati
31st Dec 2017 8:12pm
I enjoyed this snippet ( albeit sad ). Because you have requested Honest Critique, I would suggest the following,
we're all typos
from [an] ink ribbon
waiting
to be [ replaced ]
Grammar is necessity; however, the rest just a suggestion.
May your New Year be Blessed with much Love and Happiness! 🎊❤
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Re: Re. The futures whats at stake
samael
(Zaroff poetry)
31st Dec 2017 8:15pm
Updated for grammar
you rock Ahavati
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Re. The futures whats at stake
RoseJasmine
1st Jan 2018 2:51pm
"We are all typos" is so very catchy. Nicely written!
Much love
RoseJasmine
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