A poetic kiss...

such sensuality sophs.

Thank you dearest, much appreciated.

mouth watering....

Glad it made your mouth water ;)
Deeply appreciated always.

Definitely erotic and sensual without being too over the top. Leaves me wanting more...

Thank you Eswaller - glad you liked this one :)

Thank you - appreciated always.

Damn....that's a stunning closer my compliments

Thank you QQ, you’ve given me a big smile with your gracious comment :)

OMFG...that's gotta be the most perfect poetic kiss I've ever tasted lol...whew, you truly sizzled in this steamy spill my dear!!! :)


Wow...blocked me? That truly hurts...

Aww thank you. Your comment has left me melted...

A wonderfully poetic kiss I'd like to taste one day..

Love it<<3!
H

Plenty kisses to go round... lol.
Thank you H - deeply appreciate you always <3

Love it

Thank you :)

Absolutely breathtaking in its imagery.
For whom it may be written, you have touched their soul

Aww thank you - hope you’re right ;)
Deeply appreciated <3

a terrific write - really enjoyed this one - thank you for sharing :-))

probably all male poets here will think its about them (lol)

Thank you David, so glad you enjoyed this lil kiss.

Lol, I’m ok with that... ;)

Echo David Macleod, especially given the twist in the last line. Poem goes well with your sensuous profile pic.

Thank you dearest poet - deeply appreciated.
Your compliment has me blushing...

Ogod....


on🔥with misting💧

Thank you lovely - so happy you felt this <3

How could my mouth not water after reading this sizzling sensual delight! You take this old dude down the path to paradise with words perfectly placed in an erotic dance. God girl you know what you're doing!

John

Thank you dearest John. You have me blushing with your gracious comment. So pleased you enjoyed this kiss ;)

Increadible ink!

Thank you - deeply appreciated :)

FROM
lipssssza
uppa to lowaaa
all love to devooaaa
lolely poettrick sexy powwaa  weella donnaaa

Thank you again - deeply appreciated :)

You just crumpled me like a piece of paper

"I wish I could kiss you,
with the same lips that  
spit fire and caress souls. "- holy shit i could revel in this line for hours

" lips raw.
Drops of honey forming
perfectly in the slit."-  just wow, i could add this honey to my milk any and every day .

bravo sophie, awesome write.

Thank you dearest samael. You have gifted me a big smile with your gracious comment and I have to agree, honey and milk every day is the way to go ;)

This is too good for me to comment, that's why I hesitated...but still I want to let you know how much I love this and you...
Happy New Year dear sophie!

much love
RoseJasmine

Aww sweetest RJ, I’m flattered but know that you also often leave me in awe.
Appreciate you lots and a very Happy New Year to you and yours too <3

Even if I had no voice, my lips would love to plead with yours.
Very stirring write Sophie!

"I’d like the touch of your lips  
to plead with mine.
Lungs full with lust  
leaving me breathless."

Just love the imagery here!!!
JJ

Blushing from your gracious comment dearest JJ.
Appreciate you always :)

This is excellent! Love that second stanza. Sensual and well written..enjoyed!!

Thank you dearest poet.
Appreciate it deeply :)

Tasty ink

Thank you :)

damn this is so ultra sensual...

short, direct and loaded with
burgeoning intentions..

Thank you dearest Naajir :)

After scrolling to China, I finally got here...how the hell did I miss this dear sophie...I know I have been aloof and wayward these days but I thought I hit the ones I missed...please forgive...needless to say, males and females alike are craving the honey and any other sweets you have to offer, lol...enticing ink indeed!

Xoxo Taryn

Aw sweetest Taryn, never no need to apologise. If there one thing I’m learning quickly, it’s that it’s almost impossible to catch-up here lol.
So glad to see you stop by for a lil sugar fix ;)
Appreciate it always <3

lip licking good, but seriously the feeling of longing resonates deep and leaves the reading begging for more. Well done dear ❤

Sweetest Tim, your lovely comment has gifted me smiles this evening <3

"You leave poems in my mouth
and my lips raw. "

gorgeous lines to a very beautiful poem..

love Crim

Gorgeous comment from a gorgeous lady.
Thank you <3

This is the first poem of yours that I've read and I'm really impressed. Count me among those who's mouths are watering. I absolutely love the line " You leave poems in my mouth and my lips raw". What a powerful image filled with raw sensuality. Wonderful stuff.  
Thank you.

Thank you, I deeply appreciate the visit and glad it got your mouth watering ;)

Thank you :)

Not that you need my humble comment added to this enormous list of fans, but this piece is fantastically erotic  using just a few words. You have lips figured out...I love this line, "I’d like the touch of your lips to plead with mine." That goes much deeper than your ordinary smooch. The sort of double entendre in this passage leaves me with a serious case of tingles:
"my lips raw.
Drops of honey forming
perfectly in the slit."

Bravisima!

This one is extremely sensual...it left me wanting absolutely more from you....u have tremendous skill my dear poet

Love Autumn

very romantic,
i love this ending

You leave poems in my mouth
and my lips raw.
Drops of honey forming
perfectly in the slit.  
 
Does your mouth water for me too...?

you truly have a good way with words.. a truly enjoyable read

Nice imagery and beautiful description of oral intimacy.

Fantastic