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Silent Night - Hole-less Night
Such beauty my fingertips will never touch
Her breasts capped by nipples targeting my heart
Such softness I will never penetrate
Her flower opening to my throbbing desires
Such a woman will never love me
Her heart beating life into my loins
Such sweetness spoken from her lips
Dripping with desire to taste my passionate nectar
Such dreams keep me awake at night
Pretending she is more than words in erotic poems
Such as this fantasy on Christmas night
When silence has calmed the raging fire within me
And glowing embers beneath the burning yulelog
Crackle and spark with the warmth of your naked skin
Tempting my flesh to extend it's reach inside of you
Such thoughts are the stuff of Christmas wishes and dreams
Her breasts capped by nipples targeting my heart
Such softness I will never penetrate
Her flower opening to my throbbing desires
Such a woman will never love me
Her heart beating life into my loins
Such sweetness spoken from her lips
Dripping with desire to taste my passionate nectar
Such dreams keep me awake at night
Pretending she is more than words in erotic poems
Such as this fantasy on Christmas night
When silence has calmed the raging fire within me
And glowing embers beneath the burning yulelog
Crackle and spark with the warmth of your naked skin
Tempting my flesh to extend it's reach inside of you
Such thoughts are the stuff of Christmas wishes and dreams
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Re. Silent Night - Hole-less Night
26th Dec 2017 3:31am
I love this so much dear J! lol "hole-less"Written so passionately and beautifully dear poet...
and I feel so much of the "holelessness.." well, not necessarily "hole-less" but you know what I mean lol
Cheerful holy cheers!
<3H
and I feel so much of the "holelessness.." well, not necessarily "hole-less" but you know what I mean lol
Cheerful holy cheers!
<3H
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26th Dec 2017 3:38am
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27th Dec 2017 8:40pm
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26th Dec 2017 5:46am
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27th Dec 2017 8:26pm
Thanks for the rippling nipples Daibach! I can hear the cartoon boing in my head right now... Lol
JJ
JJ
Re. Silent Night - Hole-less Night
27th Dec 2017 6:05am
I like these poignant lines,
' Pretending she is more than words in erotic poems
Such as this fantasy on Christmas night '
I actually have been writing a poem about woman as a poem in a man's mind,
I'll post it soon, hope you will like it, it's more love than erotic which is more my forte :)
' Pretending she is more than words in erotic poems
Such as this fantasy on Christmas night '
I actually have been writing a poem about woman as a poem in a man's mind,
I'll post it soon, hope you will like it, it's more love than erotic which is more my forte :)
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27th Dec 2017 8:24pm
Thanks for the comment PR! Looking forward to reading your poem! I don't think I write that many erotic poems, at least not in comparison to others, and mine are not extreme in description or language deliberately. I like stretching my imagination and letting others go as far as theirs will take them without being force-fed hard-core porn. There is a fine line between love poetry and erotic poetry but a grand canyon if they are extreme.
JJ
JJ
Re. Silent Night - Hole-less Night
27th Dec 2017 12:19pm
This is sad but funny. Love your humor and how you turned sadness into harmless self-deprecating...dear JJ, you deserve the beautiful love you want if you wish....
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Silent Night - Hole-less Night
27th Dec 2017 8:00pm
One of the lessons in life I learned a long time ago was to laugh at the absurdities I have faced even when they are unfair. If I couldn't make a joke of my pain, it would make a joke out of me...
Thank you RoseJasmine!
JJ
Thank you RoseJasmine!
JJ
Re. Silent Night - Hole-less Night
Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 4:37pm
Aww makes me sad to think you don’t have the love of a lady that you want and deserve - poignant. Loved the humour you laced throughout though.
Hugs always :)
Hugs always :)
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Re: Re. Silent Night - Hole-less Night
29th Dec 2017 7:01pm
Sometimes the subtlety of humor is just enough to take the edge off of the sadness and get me through the night.
JJ
JJ
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29th Dec 2017 7:38pm