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Feeling the Love Haikus 7.0
(i) Heart Beats
feeling the passion
my heart just misses a beat
your love brings it back
(ii) Never Give Up
An unexpected love
a love of intensity
unconventional
(iii) Proposal
no time like the now
I Love you so, lets get married
no knee bending needed
(iv) Heart of Glass
love lies the stillest
when matured like a good wine
now and then with fizz
(v) Micro Love
I really love chips
romance on the internet
its not a hard drive
(vi) Can't Be helped
the boy cant help it
the girl cant help it either
Love happened to them
(vii) Rules
One breaks the rules
love sometimes demands
Proves love is true
Published 22nd Dec 2017
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2017 9:16pm
If you could see the grin on my face reading these you would laugh out loud. Giddy giggles for you! Lots of hugs, my friend :-)
24th Dec 2017 11:09pm
22nd Dec 2017 9:23pm
24th Dec 2017 11:12pm
you know what I think it was - just took me some time to realise :-)
unconventional Indeed - thank you :-))))
unconventional Indeed - thank you :-))))
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2017 9:35am
So much my friend, do I appreciate Your talent.
Thank you for always finding a way to help me smile when I need It.
Bear Hugs Brother.
Much respect.
Thank you for always finding a way to help me smile when I need It.
Bear Hugs Brother.
Much respect.
24th Dec 2017 11:14pm
Man I wish I could always make you smile my brother
Hey if you need and ear I am here :-))))
Big warm Scottish Bear Hugs my friend :-)))))
Hey if you need and ear I am here :-))))
Big warm Scottish Bear Hugs my friend :-)))))
24th Dec 2017 5:44am
My heart is melting
Line by line I'm further swooned
Loving hugs for you
=)
Line by line I'm further swooned
Loving hugs for you
=)
24th Dec 2017 11:08pm
Written for a very special lady - Oh aye it's YOU :-)))
Huge love and hugs :-)))))
Huge love and hugs :-)))))
24th Dec 2017 11:15pm
aw David i'm so happy
& excited for you both..
"(iii) Proposal
no time like the now
I Love you so, lets get married
no knee bending needed "
congratulations..
love & hugs..
Brenda
& excited for you both..
"(iii) Proposal
no time like the now
I Love you so, lets get married
no knee bending needed "
congratulations..
love & hugs..
Brenda
24th Dec 2017 11:38pm
hehehehe only you sweet Brenda would be so bold to comment on that one (LMAO)
Hue big massive Hugs by the thousand :-))))))))))))
Hue big massive Hugs by the thousand :-))))))))))))
