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Bleeding Life
teardrops
falling
just like
hard rain
memories
fogging up
heartless
mirrors
parched
rye lips
needing
more
whiskey
dreams
liquid
mistress
words
hypnotize
poets
spell
tragic
verse
bleeding
life
falling
just like
hard rain
memories
fogging up
heartless
mirrors
parched
rye lips
needing
more
whiskey
dreams
liquid
mistress
words
hypnotize
poets
spell
tragic
verse
bleeding
life
Published 17th Dec 2017
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17th Dec 2017 10:01pm
passionate lines
Dave my brother
really felt these..
"whiskey
dreams
liquid
mistress
words
hypnotize
poets"
you spellbind me with your poetry..
I love you..
Brenda
Dave my brother
really felt these..
"whiskey
dreams
liquid
mistress
words
hypnotize
poets"
you spellbind me with your poetry..
I love you..
Brenda
17th Dec 2017 10:07pm
Brenda.. always warmed by your kind words.. so glad poetry is my gig.. i don't know any other way, to tell my story.. the more i think about it, so many poets, and poetesses.. we're just sharing our life stories.. i love that, about this craft we share.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
20th Dec 2017 00:30am
If we cant bleed life, then what have we?
23rd Dec 2017 2:26am
Anonymous
6th Jan 2018 6:30am
My brother you have summed up our craft perfectly...good or bad, the lines are written with life’s blood...I’m keeping this one close!!
I love you
Xoxo Taryn
I love you
Xoxo Taryn
Lady Taryn.. your words are always kind.. my heart is filled with joy.. you make me feel like a true poet.. so honored to make your list.. love you always my sister..
Dave
Dave
