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Hidden Love
pressure point
crippling
new wave
simple youth
fortune
cookie
wisdom
blind faith
religious
orphan
seeks
madness
delta
blues
delivered
satisfaction
whiskey
dreams
chastise
guessing
sexual
deviant
craving
more
sinful
deception
symbolic
platform
forked
tongue
dirty
crossroads
withered
vines
gripping
hearts
violet
blossoms
hidden
love
crippling
new wave
simple youth
fortune
cookie
wisdom
blind faith
religious
orphan
seeks
madness
delta
blues
delivered
satisfaction
whiskey
dreams
chastise
guessing
sexual
deviant
craving
more
sinful
deception
symbolic
platform
forked
tongue
dirty
crossroads
withered
vines
gripping
hearts
violet
blossoms
hidden
love
Published 17th Dec 2017
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Anonymous
17th Dec 2017 4:16am
Oh for fuck sake...I tried to highlight a favorite passage and it’s impossible...this whole damned thing is fabulous my brother...always questioning ourselves and craving more made to question what spurns our want and intentions...love you my brother!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
17th Dec 2017 6:35am
Lady Taryn.. you made day.. such kind words, and so supportive.. love you always my sister..
Dave
Dave
17th Dec 2017 4:33am
Brenda.. you've been so good to me.. since i first joined DU.. your support has been my life line.. couldn't imagine my creative journey without you.. individual, or collabing.. i wouldn't change a thing.. and it still gives me chills, when i make your reading list.. love you, precious lady..
Dave
Dave
17th Dec 2017 8:05pm
It's strait forward
kicks you in the face
point blank
i dig that second stanza
"religious
orphan
seeks
madness
delta
blues
delivered
satisfaction "
well penned diamonddave75
kicks you in the face
point blank
i dig that second stanza
"religious
orphan
seeks
madness
delta
blues
delivered
satisfaction "
well penned diamonddave75
17th Dec 2017 8:13pm
Samael.. so glad you dig it.. i appreciate your kind words.. thanks for the add.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
20th Dec 2017 00:29am
Sir Dave, you always make my heart and mind race!!!
absolutely felt hun
absolutely felt hun
23rd Dec 2017 2:24am
Splitsunsets.. you always make me feel important.. so humbled by your kind words..
Dave
Dave
