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Girl Talk
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"How was the weekend"?
I couldn't lie
"Great"
Side stepping with an
Accompanying
"And yours"?
I know,
I should have explained
(In glorious detail)
how one can experience
so much over a traveling
weekend
I guess my thoughts on
her impending jelousy
prevented such girl talk
gossip other than great.
"How was the weekend"?
I couldn't lie
"Great"
Side stepping with an
Accompanying
"And yours"?
I know,
I should have explained
(In glorious detail)
how one can experience
so much over a traveling
weekend
I guess my thoughts on
her impending jelousy
prevented such girl talk
gossip other than great.
Published 16th Dec 2017
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16th Dec 2017 6:05pm
The last stanza, was for me, the gist of the poem and an important message to carry on my journey.
The possibility of making one feel less fortunate and thus bypassing the subject is most certainly the noble and kind action to follow.
The possibility of making one feel less fortunate and thus bypassing the subject is most certainly the noble and kind action to follow.
16th Dec 2017 6:24pm
Yes perfectly put in comments
Humble be the person with the biggest heart
Glad you got the gist of the write
Humble be the person with the biggest heart
Glad you got the gist of the write
Anonymous
17th Dec 2017 3:30am
Splendid Sweet Rose!! However something tells me a friend you would have wouldn’t be the jealous type... :)
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
17th Dec 2017 5:03am
Very true, though depends on what girlfriend I was talking to and their own situation my girls are complexities as entities
Sure I have been known to spill with the inquisitive ones
Sure I have been known to spill with the inquisitive ones
