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The drip
Your Love is like the medicine I can not afford. Throwing my life into unbelievable discord.
Coming in and out like a lover in the night. Drawing from me in our moonlight.
Pleasure and pain is written in your eyes. I saw it when I met you, yet I told myself it was all lies.
I should have listened, I should have fled. Now I'm laying here again like a junkie in your bed.
How do I break free from this pattern you've shown. How do I leave you behind you are my methadone.
Coming in and out like a lover in the night. Drawing from me in our moonlight.
Pleasure and pain is written in your eyes. I saw it when I met you, yet I told myself it was all lies.
I should have listened, I should have fled. Now I'm laying here again like a junkie in your bed.
How do I break free from this pattern you've shown. How do I leave you behind you are my methadone.
Published 15th Dec 2017
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15th Dec 2017 3:41pm
Wow, that was a wonderful poem. I love how it flowed so easily. I see you're a new member, welcome to underground poetry. I wish you the best.
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15th Dec 2017 9:04pm
I love rhyme and rhythm and am glad you use it...one suggestion, break the lines into rhyming couplets...easier visually to digest...look forward to reading more
15th Dec 2017 9:18pm
19th Jan 2018 12:13pm
.....retrograde reading this am. This a gem that I think we have all found yourself mining a time or two. Paints the perfect picture of an agony I held close to my heart :-)
19th Jan 2018 11:43pm
