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Snow Crystal Cloudy Cold
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I've gone & got a
spring in my step
Clarity of colourful light
vanquishing grey mood
Clear future vision from
snow crystal cloudy cold
Random thought smiles
to girly giggles without
possible punchlines in
public places
He'll be here soon enough
Another step taken
A springy one too.
*written for my then future
Husband many winters past
Yeah 💋
I've still got that spring in
my step
I've gone & got a
spring in my step
Clarity of colourful light
vanquishing grey mood
Clear future vision from
snow crystal cloudy cold
Random thought smiles
to girly giggles without
possible punchlines in
public places
He'll be here soon enough
Another step taken
A springy one too.
*written for my then future
Husband many winters past
Yeah 💋
I've still got that spring in
my step
Published 11th Dec 2017
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11th Dec 2017 5:44pm
So glad for you, Rose.
I too get these feelings after 30 years of being with my now husband.
A smile you have now placed on my lips, is much appreciated.
I too get these feelings after 30 years of being with my now husband.
A smile you have now placed on my lips, is much appreciated.
It's wonderful in a relationship such as is
Takes working at but enjoyable work always
Dusted this one down and re posted
Tnx Amorous_Tryst xoxo
Takes working at but enjoyable work always
Dusted this one down and re posted
Tnx Amorous_Tryst xoxo
Anonymous
11th Dec 2017 9:45pm
So lovely and inspiring too - gives us all hope... Could maybe do with a few pointers on where to find something as beautiful lol.
A very touching write :)
A very touching write :)
11th Dec 2017 10:10pm
Look for the finger of fate SE xD
Always to be found pointing Fate & Death
but jeeeez don't get them mixed up! 😆😊
Always to be found pointing Fate & Death
but jeeeez don't get them mixed up! 😆😊
Anonymous
12th Dec 2017 3:42pm
Haha, this made me giggle - thank you ;)
12th Dec 2017 3:55pm
11th Dec 2017 11:20pm
beautiful Rose
I can feel the giggy love
the type that gives you butterflies & blushes..
so beautiful he still
makes you feel that way..
delightful write..
love Crim
I can feel the giggy love
the type that gives you butterflies & blushes..
so beautiful he still
makes you feel that way..
delightful write..
love Crim
12th Dec 2017 5:30am
I really can't recall a time when he didn't to be honest
I guess some people just have that sparkling chemical within them to move another as they do
I guess some people just have that sparkling chemical within them to move another as they do
12th Dec 2017 2:39am
12th Dec 2017 5:32am
