inside

nice digital ink....declaration of the inner to the outer...this practice is needed in our selfish world...

much love
-J

Thank you so much for your comment, I agree it is much needed in the world today

"embrace the lonely taste of kindness"- like a beautiful stranger opening a door for you and never crossing paths again

left in the blindness
the dark
fumbling
"holding onto the dream "- that's a million words said in just four right there, nice.

"this is a thought intervention
caused to find the pieces of my
sanity "-* as pieces were breaking off this whole time
this whole life
a porcelain doll cracking

casting hearts and self into swamps
with no swim signs posted


left with life lessons

Splendid write as always mariellewrites

good overall tone throughout
good structure
it's simple yet elegant.

well penned.

thank you so much, i love the visuals it brought you, i real think you conveyed my message. thanks for your comment and for reading

So much like me, always searching for a comfort zone where to balance myself to stay inside or cross the line. The pain from my inside oozing from my skin is like sweat flowing....but that's fine....something just like that my dear marielle.....

nuch love RoseJasmine

thank you rose jasmine I'm glad you liked this one. it was a stream of thought from years ago.
:)

Nicely done.

thank you for reading and your comment