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Two Bodies In The Mood
Two Bodies in The Mood
Lovers on a bed of leisure,
Caressing their depth with pleasure.
Hands up,mouths down,
Legs coil,in-love drown.
c.2017
Lovers on a bed of leisure,
Caressing their depth with pleasure.
Hands up,mouths down,
Legs coil,in-love drown.
c.2017
Published 4th Dec 2017
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4th Dec 2017 7:07pm
This poem captures the moment of intimacy in a smooth easy flow.The length of the poem is refreshing,jst right.In my opinion this is very well put together.
4th Dec 2017 8:48pm
A gigantic thank you to you... Marvellous... Thanks for the good words... Joshua.
