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Feign
Leaves fall off trees
Flying back and forth with breeze
Dying butterflies
Flying back and forth with breeze
Dying butterflies
Published 30th Nov 2017
| Edited 19th Apr 2020
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30th Nov 2017 12:37pm
30th Nov 2017 12:42pm
Thank you Soledad my dear. Your comment always cheers me up.
Much Love, RoseJasmine
Much Love, RoseJasmine
30th Nov 2017 1:34pm
yes butterflies are born to die(burn)
but in flames
leaves suspended in air remain
until...............
snows overcome
but in flames
leaves suspended in air remain
until...............
snows overcome
30th Nov 2017 2:21pm
Thank you for the beautiful comment. I love the expression "butterflies are born to die(burn) but in flames ". Enjoy your visit Again!
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
yes butterflies are born to die(burn)
but in flames
leaves suspended in air remain
until...............
snows overcome
thanks Rosy
o kid like to me
u r a good poet- tree
soonly will emerge a lovely poetree
but in flames
leaves suspended in air remain
until...............
snows overcome
thanks Rosy
o kid like to me
u r a good poet- tree
soonly will emerge a lovely poetree
1st Dec 2017 3:25am
1st Dec 2017 3:29am
thanks
just read the modified erotica just posted
you will cccccccccccc......
or else kill meeeeeeeeeee
just read the modified erotica just posted
you will cccccccccccc......
or else kill meeeeeeeeeee
30th Nov 2017 2:37pm
30th Nov 2017 2:46pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
30th Nov 2017 4:08pm
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Glad you liked it. Let me think of your Haiku "Playful". Where is the reply? :)
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
1st Dec 2017 6:05am
1st Dec 2017 11:56pm
2nd Dec 2017 2:17am
Thank you dear H, Glad you liked it. I came up with this little piece while teaching my student. :)
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
3rd Dec 2017 4:33am
3rd Dec 2017 6:08am
Thank you TRDunn for sharing your thought. It's good to know you like it.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
3rd Dec 2017 9:39am
3rd Dec 2017 9:47am
Thank you for the nice comment. Great to see you and hear from you.
Love, Rosejasmine
Love, Rosejasmine
3rd Dec 2017 9:31pm
4th Dec 2017 00:53am
Dearest David, ooooh, love your comment....it's cute. Thank you so much for the visit! :))))))
Love. RoseJasmine
Love. RoseJasmine
4th Dec 2017 9:34am
Look at my RJ! Showing off the versatility! :) outstanding brevity
my dear one...
my dear one...
4th Dec 2017 10:18am
Oh, my dear Ric. thank you for the nice comment. I am flattered....so so glad you liked it.......
Big hug! RoseJasmine
Big hug! RoseJasmine
6th Dec 2017 8:10am
beautiful picture in my head ...you words guide me to your land...loved this
Jeff
Jeff
6th Dec 2017 8:17am
Just follow my lead, you will see....thank you for the nice comment.
Love, RoseJsmine
Love, RoseJsmine
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 00:44am
This one is just special, perfect in every way.
14th Mar 2018 7:39am
I just found this I didn't reply to you for some mistake. Dear Sophie, sorry for the late reply. I really appreciate your read and encouragement, especially for the RL add. Thank you so much.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
14th Mar 2018 7:33am
The fall of something beautiful. A brilliant image you've projected in these words.
14th Mar 2018 7:42am
Thank you Case for stopping by and leaving your thought. Really apprciated!
love
RoseJasmine
love
RoseJasmine
