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Where World of Fantasy Exists
Please, may grace of romance kiss upon me
True and purest of hearts to bless my world
Dreams may never be dreams again
Losing self in a fantasy realm
Its richness like chocolate
Happiness melts in
Devine warmth defrosts my heart
World, it spins
Dizzying my mind
Wonderland and fairytales
is where I belong
Glittering magic
Spells of love, I wish to cast
Art to purify dirt
Lightness brightening
Darkness never darkening
Nothing like sadness
Sorrow
Depression-
in this world, it'll ever be
It'd never be
Absent, but present
Insane-
but it's sane
So I continue to dream
Yearn, and only dream
In my head
where it'll always be
Never do I wish to wake
True and purest of hearts to bless my world
Dreams may never be dreams again
Losing self in a fantasy realm
Its richness like chocolate
Happiness melts in
Devine warmth defrosts my heart
World, it spins
Dizzying my mind
Wonderland and fairytales
is where I belong
Glittering magic
Spells of love, I wish to cast
Art to purify dirt
Lightness brightening
Darkness never darkening
Nothing like sadness
Sorrow
Depression-
in this world, it'll ever be
It'd never be
Absent, but present
Insane-
but it's sane
So I continue to dream
Yearn, and only dream
In my head
where it'll always be
Never do I wish to wake
Written by
SourMelon0313
(H)
Published 29th Nov 2017
| Edited 5th Dec 2017
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Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 3:57am
beautiful!! dare to dream and live your fairytale. i hope you live happily ever
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Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 4:10am
Thank you so much for your nice comment Prometheus :)
I hope so too, and for you as well!
Your time and words in your world always appreciated,
Love
H
I hope so too, and for you as well!
Your time and words in your world always appreciated,
Love
H
Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
Anonymous
29th Nov 2017 6:31am
Such beautiful poetry, fully took me to a different world, a world which fills me with happiness :-)
Star xo
Star xo

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Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 7:57pm
I'm so glad my writings have brought happiness in :)
Thank you for your wonderful comment dear star!
Love
H
Thank you for your wonderful comment dear star!
Love
H
Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 9:50am
Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 7:58pm
Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 10:33am
Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 8:00pm
Oh my...
That's such a big compliment!
Thank you so much for your kindness and time der poetikness...!
:)
Appreciations to your support,
Love
H
That's such a big compliment!
Thank you so much for your kindness and time der poetikness...!
:)
Appreciations to your support,
Love
H
Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
a very enchanting dream it is
beautiful H I would never
wish to wake from such a place..
i'll see you there dear lady in my dreams :)
love Crim
beautiful H I would never
wish to wake from such a place..
i'll see you there dear lady in my dreams :)
love Crim
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Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 8:04pm
Let us rejoice in the sweetness of our dreams lovely crim!
Thank you so much for your time in my world of fantasy ...
Always appreciated :)
Love
H
Thank you so much for your time in my world of fantasy ...
Always appreciated :)
Love
H
Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 6:59pm
fascinating and strangely beautiful dreamscape - a really inspirational wrote - I loved it :-)
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Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 8:07pm
I 'm glad you enjoyed my works...!
It's so sweet to dream..
Thank you so much for your dear words on my world in here :)
Great appreciations,
Love
H
It's so sweet to dream..
Thank you so much for your dear words on my world in here :)
Great appreciations,
Love
H
Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 9:05pm
I like how this one lays out on the page ... longer stanzas in the beginning ... then shortening as the poem evolves. The imagery of chocolate ... happiness melting ... defrosting the speaker's heart - wonderful sustained image. "Art to purify dirt" - great line. "lightness brightening/darkness never darkening" - would parallel structure and contrast. This poem leaves me with such a warm happy hopeful feeling ... bravo Little One.
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Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 9:52pm
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and comment Big Sis!
:)
I'm glad you enjoyed and are left with fuzzy feelings with my works...
I wasn't sure because I use chocolate reference so much lol
Your time brings me joy,
Thank you :)
Love
H
:)
I'm glad you enjoyed and are left with fuzzy feelings with my works...
I wasn't sure because I use chocolate reference so much lol
Your time brings me joy,
Thank you :)
Love
H
Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
29th Nov 2017 9:54pm
Don't worry about using too much chocolate ... that is never ever possible ... ;-)
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Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
2nd Dec 2017 4:49am
Very beautiful and uplifting. Love the positive attitude toward life. Even though life is difficult and sometomes disappointing, we will never lose hope.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
3rd Dec 2017 2:20am
Thank you so much rose jasmine, I greatly appreciate your visit, and am glad you enjoyed it :)
Love
H
Love
H
Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
5th Dec 2017 1:03pm
Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
5th Dec 2017 8:11pm
Perfection... itself is a dream
Nothing is perfect, but I shall aim for it..
Thank you for visiting my dream dear Jeff!
:)
Love
H
Nothing is perfect, but I shall aim for it..
Thank you for visiting my dream dear Jeff!
:)
Love
H
Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
5th Dec 2017 8:27pm
dreams can be perfect....there application in the physical world can never be...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
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Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
8th Jan 2018 11:36pm
Re: Re. Where World of Fantasy Exists
8th Jan 2018 11:47pm
Your words are very beautiful as well...
thank you so very much for your kindness in my works :)
<3
H
thank you so very much for your kindness in my works :)
<3
H