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Pause

Let me lose myself
in cotton candy clouds of silliness
to ease this heavy breath.
Tenderloin
Written by Tenderloin
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Re. Pause
26th Nov 2017 3:09pm
Lovely rumination that works almost every time. Sounds like a Southern sunrise ( or so we call it down here ).  

Welcome to the Deep Side.
Ahavati
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Re: Re. Pause
26th Nov 2017 3:35pm
Thank you.  Glad to be onboard.
Tenderloin
Re. Pause
26th Nov 2017 3:12pm
sweet verses
SweetOblivion
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Re. Pause
26th Nov 2017 3:38pm
Thank you!
Tenderloin
Re. Pause
28th Jun 2020 2:13pm
👌
AspergerPoet56
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