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Criminal Past
I was the Thelma to her Louise
But I let her drive off the cliff alone
I avoided arrest--
I escaped death--
In the middle of the chase
I switched sides...
Now I'm the Bonnie to his Clyde
We were a golden blaze
Those first few glory days
This ride or die
I'm the traitor and the wife
Take the money, steal the key
Get away with this crime spree
These robberies--
Her blood forever on my hands--
Bounty on my head--
But I'll never plead guilty
It was self-defense
My case is insanity
So I disappear in a puff of smoke
Never to be seen again
Leave false clues--
Cover my tracks--
Try to separate fiction from fact
Get past your lie detector test
Behind the mask
Criminal mastermind
The culprit strikes again
Go on...
Try
Catch me if you can
But I let her drive off the cliff alone
I avoided arrest--
I escaped death--
In the middle of the chase
I switched sides...
Now I'm the Bonnie to his Clyde
We were a golden blaze
Those first few glory days
This ride or die
I'm the traitor and the wife
Take the money, steal the key
Get away with this crime spree
These robberies--
Her blood forever on my hands--
Bounty on my head--
But I'll never plead guilty
It was self-defense
My case is insanity
So I disappear in a puff of smoke
Never to be seen again
Leave false clues--
Cover my tracks--
Try to separate fiction from fact
Get past your lie detector test
Behind the mask
Criminal mastermind
The culprit strikes again
Go on...
Try
Catch me if you can
Published 22nd Nov 2017
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11th Dec 2017 8:25pm
You just took me on a love diesel powered robbery binge through the depths of the heart. i thank you lol.
"I'm the traitor and the wife "
"In the middle of the chase
I switched sides.."
i've got the Benedict Arnold feeling on this...i likes.
well penned Page_Writer
"I'm the traitor and the wife "
"In the middle of the chase
I switched sides.."
i've got the Benedict Arnold feeling on this...i likes.
well penned Page_Writer
I think that is one of my favorite ways someone has ever described one of my poems. Thank you.
- Paige Rider
- Paige Rider
17th Dec 2017 12:13pm
20th Feb 2018 1:00pm
“I was the Thelma to her Louise
But I let her drive off the cliff alone”
Good choice ... enjoyed this piece. Gibbs would be baffled :)
But I let her drive off the cliff alone”
Good choice ... enjoyed this piece. Gibbs would be baffled :)
