Hmmmmm... To start with, this serve as a powerful couplet.
Since this poem is classified under the Observational topics my view of maybe the poet to the addressee are lovers is not so strong and defensive.
But looking at it from another point: The poet and his culprit(sorry i used that poetically) seems to appear as friends who knows things about themselves.
This type of friends are those friends:
That know each other even when shadows are lurking under the trees on the clothing of the dusk.
That throws words a while and get stuck back in a glance.
That reads the smile of their faces and write an essay on what it meant.
I'll put a stop here:
For the poet to be so confidential about his culprit's state.
Then i'll call them, 'Ink in the pen that travels to'n'fro'.
Well JB I'm more the than honoured with your wonderful thoughts on my (rather short) write You might be right you might be wrong either way it's down to the individual and what they see within I like what you see indeed xD
You know,poetry is bound to perspectives... So,views differs. That's my on view,another poet's may tally or contradict,yet all works out well. It's a pleasure though... Wish to know you better...