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authentic lazarus
its not that i didn’t care, but was
left bare
and channeling
to just be
intuitive
and haunting
could i be an actual person
amongst
drawings
faint glimpses of recollection
causing
i longed to be
actual
authentic
circling
raw, relentless, real
we could open each other up
tell eachother what we really feel
to be vivid, ethereal
marielle
Published 18th Nov 2017
| Edited 27th Nov 2017
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beautifully written
however
the last line lost me
"to be vivid, non corporeal"
non corporeal - incorporeal ?
( nonmaterial, nonphysical, bodiless, immaterial, incorporeal, insubstantial, spiritual
ethereal, metaphysical, psychic) ?
to be vivid, ethereal ?
or
to be vivid, corporeal
Synonyms of corporeal
animal, bodily, carnal, corporal, physical, fleshly, material, somatic
Words Related to corporeal
anatomic (or anatomical), physiological (or physiologic), sensual, sensuous, hand-to-hand
other than that, 'twas a great read...
ALL the Best
jonni
however
the last line lost me
"to be vivid, non corporeal"
non corporeal - incorporeal ?
( nonmaterial, nonphysical, bodiless, immaterial, incorporeal, insubstantial, spiritual
ethereal, metaphysical, psychic) ?
to be vivid, ethereal ?
or
to be vivid, corporeal
Synonyms of corporeal
animal, bodily, carnal, corporal, physical, fleshly, material, somatic
Words Related to corporeal
anatomic (or anatomical), physiological (or physiologic), sensual, sensuous, hand-to-hand
other than that, 'twas a great read...
ALL the Best
jonni
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Nov 2017 3:06am
26th Nov 2017 3:05am
Hon, this is lovingly amazing.
though i sense a painful undertone here,
yet the pain just makes sense ...when
we find another to be worthy of being
our occupant
So we endure...
and will continue reading you!! thank you dear
for appearing.
Love this much
though i sense a painful undertone here,
yet the pain just makes sense ...when
we find another to be worthy of being
our occupant
So we endure...
and will continue reading you!! thank you dear
for appearing.
Love this much
26th Nov 2017 4:25pm
