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Wrapped

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So wrapped up in us
that I doubt I'd notice
the day turn to night
Lookawaynow
Written by Lookawaynow (Rose)
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Re. Wrapped
(Zaroff poetry)
16th Nov 2017 4:18pm
This makes me want to build a blanket fort and snuggle all day..excellent idea provoking poem Lookawaynow...i know what i'm doing when i get home later today.
samael
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Re: Re. Wrapped
(Rose)
16th Nov 2017 6:39pm
Blankets are most comforting when wrapped with another xD
Lookawaynow
Re. Wrapped
16th Nov 2017 5:49pm
nice!
mariellewrites
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Re: Re. Wrapped
(Rose)
16th Nov 2017 6:40pm
And thankyou Marielle xD
Lookawaynow
Re. Wrapped
16th Nov 2017 6:54pm
This will definitely have me appreciating winter more.

Love your thoughts here, Rose.
Amorous_tryst
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Re. Wrapped
(Rose)
16th Nov 2017 7:13pm
Indeed day spent in a lovers company
I'd not notice much else going on xD
Lookawaynow

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