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When GOD Responded
Heard no words
read no text
lived the life of recluse
in curtained darkness
of the book
A left side surprise
the values reshaped
and I heard my name called
with tease
a small word of sleaze
My first real prayer fell from my lips
"Oh father,
forgive me and see my faults
if this is wrong
and a thing, not to be done
create a reason
for her not to come
hear my prayer"
It was a hell-bent message
that told
of a bloke who had
taken Panados
and the tradition fell
but the fact
of the matter
the truth to be told
My god arranged reason for her to be gone!
And I sat in my darkness
wishing to sing
but then rather gave thanks
from my heart to him
"I'm loving angles instead"
[!]
read no text
lived the life of recluse
in curtained darkness
of the book
A left side surprise
the values reshaped
and I heard my name called
with tease
a small word of sleaze
My first real prayer fell from my lips
"Oh father,
forgive me and see my faults
if this is wrong
and a thing, not to be done
create a reason
for her not to come
hear my prayer"
It was a hell-bent message
that told
of a bloke who had
taken Panados
and the tradition fell
but the fact
of the matter
the truth to be told
My god arranged reason for her to be gone!
And I sat in my darkness
wishing to sing
but then rather gave thanks
from my heart to him
"I'm loving angles instead"
[!]
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