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Daft Dinosaur Haikus 7.0
(i) Wooly, Wooly
the wooly mammoth
elephant in sheeps' clothing
or just a big sheep
(ii) From The Hood
How to get famous
Dinosaurs with attitude
Velosa-rappers
(iii) Racers
very quick moving
fast prehistoric monsters
the Prontosaurus
(vI) Groovy Baby
not a groovy one
well this one was such a square
the Legosaurus
(v) New Clothes
Sarah's blouse looks tight
so does her shirt: let's find out
I'll TrySarah's-tops
(vi) She
what have we got here
lady-boy with a dogs name
Trannysaurus Rex
(vii) Ouch!
he's always in pain
it is only a bad back
Spinalsoreass
Published 14th Nov 2017
| Edited 15th Nov 2017
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14th Nov 2017 2:24am
15th Nov 2017 7:19pm
14th Nov 2017 3:06am
I love this!
lol such a clever way to format the names of dinos!
Very much admire your great mind ...
A senior poet indeed...
Great respects,
-H-
lol such a clever way to format the names of dinos!
Very much admire your great mind ...
A senior poet indeed...
Great respects,
-H-
15th Nov 2017 7:20pm
thank you so much for your kind remarks - really made me smile today :-)))))))))))))))))))))
14th Nov 2017 4:31am
15th Nov 2017 7:21pm
Anonymous
14th Nov 2017 5:13am
Taking us on those curvy rides again. Triceratops was always my favorite. Big puppies. Enjoyed these! Hugasaurus! 😊🤗
15th Nov 2017 7:22pm
LOL - thank you my friend for your kind words - so glad you enjoyed them :-))))
Many many Hugsasauruses :-)))))))))))))))))
Many many Hugsasauruses :-)))))))))))))))))
Anonymous
14th Nov 2017 2:05pm
Creative shit right here bud !
Bearhugasaurus
Bearhugasaurus
15th Nov 2017 7:23pm
14th Nov 2017 9:38pm
Can agree with others it is imaginative, especially the jokingly manipulated names.
The middle line of the first haiku I notice is one syllable short (six not seven) - perhaps 'clothing' should be the word.
The middle line of the first haiku I notice is one syllable short (six not seven) - perhaps 'clothing' should be the word.
15th Nov 2017 7:25pm
thanks for the heads up I fixed it with your suggestion - glad you enjoyed them :-)))))))
thank you again :-)))
thank you again :-)))
14th Nov 2017 11:13pm
15th Nov 2017 7:26pm
thanks Josh - such a kind man :-))) Being a wee bit crazy helps me :-))))))))))))
15th Nov 2017 4:14pm
David....ingenious ink--indeed!!
Since most dino names are difficult to pronounce, in the first place, your idea of a humorous approach to this dilemma, is undeniably entertaining! And while i find myself laughing at each and every one of these, my favs are "From the Hood", and "She"...as these two species are among those that i have always found fascinating!
Would like to "velosa--(WRAP)" you in ( dino ) hugs---promising to be extra careful, of course! :))
Since most dino names are difficult to pronounce, in the first place, your idea of a humorous approach to this dilemma, is undeniably entertaining! And while i find myself laughing at each and every one of these, my favs are "From the Hood", and "She"...as these two species are among those that i have always found fascinating!
Would like to "velosa--(WRAP)" you in ( dino ) hugs---promising to be extra careful, of course! :))
15th Nov 2017 7:28pm
velosawrap - wish I had thought about that one (LOL) thank you as always for your kindness and support :-))))))
Huge Big dinohugs :-))))
Huge Big dinohugs :-))))
15th Nov 2017 5:17pm
Oh so punny my friend, right up my alley! Wonderfully creative works here... Pterribly-dactyl :D hehehe
15th Nov 2017 7:30pm
LMAO - I already had Pterriblytactile but I haven't used it yet
I am always glad when you like my poems :-)))))))
Huge Massive Dinohugs :-)))))))))
I am always glad when you like my poems :-)))))))
Huge Massive Dinohugs :-)))))))))
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18th Nov 2017 5:17pm
