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looking back on last night's poem ..
sat in the café
bemoaning my mistake
in actually attempting
to communicate ..
as if I really
wanted to be understood !
wiping my bread
as fast as I could
through the greasy remnants on
the plate ..
Published 13th Nov 2017
| Edited 15th Nov 2017
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13th Nov 2017 2:01am
As I get older I protect my tongue more and more...like this ink Paul.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
14th Nov 2017 00:43am
13th Nov 2017 10:06am
eXcellent.....(kind of eXpediant )
"my mistake in actually attempting to communicate" BRAVO
"my mistake in actually attempting to communicate" BRAVO
14th Nov 2017 00:44am
14th Nov 2017 1:56am
15th Nov 2017 00:47am
never look back! unless you're being chased by werewolves :-)))))))p
Big Like :-))))))
Big Like :-))))))
