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the burial
for when the heart
became a place confined
for the weights
of the waits
the emotions
came out
as words
clad
in deep red
too heavy
to carry
even on paper
he chose to bury them
call it cliche
he chose the location
deep
in the woods
afraid
of their exposure
and the consequences
of it
now safe
in the knowledge
no one will venture
that deep
he came home
to a new reality
the void
in his chest
for the words
clung to his heart
took it with them
deep underground
became a place confined
for the weights
of the waits
the emotions
came out
as words
clad
in deep red
too heavy
to carry
even on paper
he chose to bury them
call it cliche
he chose the location
deep
in the woods
afraid
of their exposure
and the consequences
of it
now safe
in the knowledge
no one will venture
that deep
he came home
to a new reality
the void
in his chest
for the words
clung to his heart
took it with them
deep underground
Published 10th Nov 2017
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10th Nov 2017 9:33pm
The poet, extraordinaire of thought and pen,
giving gifts of insight and truth.
The time spent above and here could not have been put to better use.
giving gifts of insight and truth.
The time spent above and here could not have been put to better use.
10th Nov 2017 9:46pm
Gifted?
i'll call it blessed.
to have such Friends extraordinaire
joy
is the company
joy
is the life.
welcomed
Appreciated
held
Close
and deeply so!
i'll call it blessed.
to have such Friends extraordinaire
joy
is the company
joy
is the life.
welcomed
Appreciated
held
Close
and deeply so!
11th Nov 2017 9:12pm
Love the depth of this poem, it's a heavy and emotional piece, a fine write indeed.
~anoonshadow
~anoonshadow
15th Nov 2017 9:54pm
welcome
is the Peer Admired.
and
the review
affectionate.
Appreciate
both
beyond words.
is the Peer Admired.
and
the review
affectionate.
Appreciate
both
beyond words.
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12th Nov 2017 10:14pm
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15th Nov 2017 9:55pm
Welcome
Dear AH!
beyond words
is the depth of your insight.
yes, all artists, do get tired wearing heart on their sleeves.
Appreciate the review
and the visit
immensely!
Dear AH!
beyond words
is the depth of your insight.
yes, all artists, do get tired wearing heart on their sleeves.
Appreciate the review
and the visit
immensely!
16th Nov 2017 7:52pm
19th Nov 2017 00:27am
art?
now that is indeed
an honor.
welcome
open arms
is the peer
and the review.
appreciate
immensely
both
now that is indeed
an honor.
welcome
open arms
is the peer
and the review.
appreciate
immensely
both
8th Dec 2017 12:11pm
Wow this is so great in metaphor and so cohesive as to content. There is play in words fabulously done too. ESP admire how u say 'void in chest and link it to the burial underground. Kudos, I'm awed.
8th Dec 2017 12:18pm
welcome
is the peer
welcome
is the review generous
some expressions
write themselves
and for this scribbler
the joy, ultimate
is in inking in its purity.
appreciation
of the visit, the review
held close
is the peer
welcome
is the review generous
some expressions
write themselves
and for this scribbler
the joy, ultimate
is in inking in its purity.
appreciation
of the visit, the review
held close
