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A Purposefully Awful Puzzle Poem

 
 
 
I slide my sneaker and shiver my tail
searching for themes that will not fail
to use these words that I've been given
in a way that makes me not look like a gibbon
So, I'll fret and worry and strike out lines
and put to poor use my something, something time
 
And if you yourself have done anything like this
hoping somewhere before long there'll come a twist
then please take pity upon my pen
and allow me some time to begin again and again
 
A sneaker here and a sneaker there
just wherever they landed when kicked off from my chair (anybody got some witeout?)
then I slide myself right up to the brink
and shiver to think this really does stink
 
(Can I get a collab volunteer? I don't want to take the blame for this by myself)!
 
Let's try some prose.
 
When I slide my hand under my pillow and discover your sneaker, it gives me a shiver, as in "WTF".    (Nope, not there either).
 
OK, as a last attempt in order to make this some kind of useful, I propose the following:
 
We've all read a poem somewhere along the way that sent a shiver down our spine because it was so bad and we wanted to throw a sneaker at the author. Well, here's your chance to write all those terrible words you were thinking, but bit your fingers. So, slide that pen out and let this garbage have it.
 
Give this your most raw critique ever, using your leastest Diss-creation. Have FUN with it, I did!
 
 
 
Yes another 3 word poem challenge,
using: What three words? Guess!
(Only a sadist would make you read this twice.)
 
Written by Amorous_tryst
Published | Edited 10th Nov 2017
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