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Maureen

It all started, with a whisper  
In your boyfriend's ear, the night you cared  
You looked my way, and saw my lack  
Then you came back, to me to ask.  
 
You said to me, 'Want to dance?'  
My boyfriend doesn't mind, by chance  
We sometimes see other people  
(But) just so you know, we're not evil.  
 
At closing time, you took me home  
A first for me, into unknown  
Menage a trois, yous had with me  
Said it was fine, yous would for free.  
 
🎵(INSTRUMENTAL BREAK)🎵  
 
You left a mark, influenced my life  
As I did yours, my first time  
We both played student and teacher  
You brought me out of my shell more.  
 
You gave me more than just your body  
You gave me confidence to shine  
It all started, with a whisper  
In your beau's ear, the night you cared.  
 
....  
 
Oh, It all started with a whisper  
In your beau's ear, the night you cared.  
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Acoustic jam about a young couple who took me 'under their wing' .... (and under their sheets!)  
 
Ballad style.  5 scenes/verses.
Written by astrosleuth
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