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beneath the hurt
beneath the hurt
there still might be a man
covered in pain, distorted
portions do still remain
beneath the valley
lies mosaic pieces of dreams
covered in dirt, as the man
i once was still screams
there still might be a man
covered in pain, distorted
portions do still remain
beneath the valley
lies mosaic pieces of dreams
covered in dirt, as the man
i once was still screams
Published 3rd Nov 2017
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3rd Nov 2017 6:33pm
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2017 6:47pm
I imagine the mosaic to be beautiful. Fractures don't destroy beauty, they give it texture and character. The man beneath is worth the patience, I think. (you)
3rd Nov 2017 6:49pm
oh dearest poet this gripped my heart..
"beneath the valley
lies mosaic pieces of dreams"
I know of those shattered dreams..
beautiful in its pain..
~Raven
"beneath the valley
lies mosaic pieces of dreams"
I know of those shattered dreams..
beautiful in its pain..
~Raven
4th Nov 2017 1:55am
Anonymous
14th Nov 2017 10:25am
Beautifully painful...
"distorted
portions do still remain"
How relatable...
Hugs <3
"distorted
portions do still remain"
How relatable...
Hugs <3
