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Good Citizen
Be careful what you write
Be careful what you say
Be careful what you like
Be careful what you play
Be mindful of the ear
Be mindful of the eye
Be mindful of your fear
Be mindful of your why
Think the way you ought to
Think in black and white
Think of how we bought you
Think that we were right
Sit still and do not scurry
Sit still and do your thing
Sit still and do not worry
Sit still under our wing
Comply do as you are told
Comply and all will be well
Comply to the single mold
Comply all the way to hell
Be careful what you say
Be careful what you like
Be careful what you play
Be mindful of the ear
Be mindful of the eye
Be mindful of your fear
Be mindful of your why
Think the way you ought to
Think in black and white
Think of how we bought you
Think that we were right
Sit still and do not scurry
Sit still and do your thing
Sit still and do not worry
Sit still under our wing
Comply do as you are told
Comply and all will be well
Comply to the single mold
Comply all the way to hell
Published 3rd Nov 2017
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3rd Nov 2017 9:30pm
This feels almost like a parent or teacher talking to a child in it’s tone. Starting off the feeling is almost kind and cautious - making the reader feel as though the character cares and is being vigilant and giving good advice, and as the poem goes on it gradually gets more direct, harsh and almost aggressive ending with ‘comply’ almost as a demand. I like the way the poem builds.
3rd Nov 2017 11:15pm
i am grateful for your intelligent interpretation, it was meant to be patronizing and insidious and then finally brutish, as organized evil always is.
Thank you kindly Justthinkdonttalk
Thank you kindly Justthinkdonttalk
4th Nov 2017 12:48pm
Do all these and you gain their trust and by their trust they mean that they have imposed a categorical imperative on you to act as they wish... Keep at it, girl, keep resisting and challenging authority with poems and deeds!... Loved it!
4th Nov 2017 1:46pm
Oh no worries, i cannot stop :-)
i love your comment and thank you for it takis
i love your comment and thank you for it takis
12th Nov 2017 5:20pm
12th Nov 2017 6:00pm
1st Jul 2018 11:51pm
Excellent piece. That's the tapes we are being bombarded with, first by our parents and later by governments and other "parental" institutions. People internalize this shit and become imprisoned by it. Fuck all that!
Well crafted piece!
Well crafted piece!
2nd Jul 2018 00:33am
Art is one way to speak out against plans of elitist control freaks. Their propaganda is so in your face now because it's been going on for so long.
Thank you kindly, glad you like it
Thank you kindly, glad you like it
